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2013-2 advanced english 1346001 kim yu jin Dad-where are you going has more factors for enjoyment than Superman has returned. Nowadays, entertainment shows father and child making memories tofether are popular. Dad-where are you going? and Superman has returned are that of show. Famous stars and their children make memory together. But Dad-where are you going is more systematic than superman has returned because it has more categories and better systematic elements for fun. Dad-where are you going seems like more producers of broadcasting and staffs care the program than Superman has returned. In this program, producers guide the travel and notify schedule to do on the travel destination. In Superman has returned, no cameras or producers appear, and fathers and their children do what they want to do, go where they want to. This shooting environment which depends on only guests’ free activities pursues realism and naturalism, but if this only realistic element were to continue, enjoyment would not be guaranteed. Dad-where are you going? ‘s format has well systematically organized elements than Superman has returned. In Dad-where are you going?, five fathers and children take a trip on the countryside every other week and and they follow the organized procedure, for example, choosing home to stay, making food by themselves, doing the countryside’s work. But Superman has returned almost shows everyday life in the home or elsewhere near the home without any mission or special activity. Also, in Dad-where are you going?, five children’s each characteristic and scenes showing they’re getting along together and it makes this program more interesting. Dad-where are you going? has systematic elements for fun, which are appearance of producers, format of travel, emphasizing each characteristics of five children, and they make the program more interesting. Although both Dad-where are you going? and Superman has returned show dad and child’s memorable experience, Dad-where are you going? can make people expect what they’re going to do and where they’re going to travel next week. That is, Dad-where are you going? is better because it can avoid boredom due to these systematic elements.

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2013-2 advanced english 1346001 kim yu jin

Dad-where are you going has more factors for enjoyment than Superman has returned.

Nowadays, entertainment shows father and child making memories tofether are popular. Dad-where are you going? and Superman has returned are that of show. Famous stars and their children make memory together. But Dad-where are you going is more systematic than superman has returned because it has more categories and better systematic elements for fun. Dad-where are you going seems like more producers of broadcasting and staffs care the program than Superman has returned. In this program, producers guide the travel and notify schedule to do on the travel destination. In Superman has returned, no cameras or producers appear, and fathers and their children do what they want to do, go where they want to. This shooting environment which depends on only guests’ free activities pursues realism and naturalism, but if this only realistic element were to continue, enjoyment would not be guaranteed. Dad-where are you going? ‘s format has well systematically organized elements than Superman has returned. In Dad-where are you going?, five fathers and children take a trip on the countryside every other week and and they follow the organized procedure, for example, choosing home to stay, making food by themselves, doing the countryside’s work. But Superman has returned almost shows everyday life in the home or elsewhere near the home without any mission or special activity. Also, in Dad-where are you going?, five children’s each characteristic and scenes showing they’re getting along together and it makes this program more interesting. Dad-where are you going? has systematic elements for fun, which are appearance of producers, format of travel, emphasizing each characteristics of five children, and they make the program more interesting. Although both Dad-where are you going? and Superman has returned show dad and child’s memorable experience, Dad-where are you going? can make people expect what they’re going to do and where they’re going to travel next week. That is, Dad-where are you going? is better because it can avoid boredom due to these systematic elements.

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A Market for Matisse1346001 Kim Yu Jin

In “A Market for Matisse”, the author says that regarding art as a investment fund is not good. This tendency, buying well known artists’ art and make profit by selling them was started by Level. As he made profit by using art in selling market. many people participated this new type of investment, but investing in art had turned into the way only for money, not for pleasure. Now days, fund managers, who have professional view in paintings help people to decide to invest their money in famous artists’ painting, or recently made paintings. But it cannot be perfectly convincing thing. In fact, no one can be sure about whether paintings’ price will soar or decline in the future. That is investing in art has many risks. Regarding art as a kind of investment fund would be a good tendency in Korea. In Korea, there are many people who invest their money in some undesirable way and squander their money. The cause of this is that people who dreaming of making a fortune invest their money in something excessively, and the rich excessively speculate in real estate or even try on gambling to increase their fortune. By introduce desirable one in selling market, we can reduce these wrong investment tradition. And art is the desirable one that many people can participate in. In fact, so many people don’t have interest in art, but as art become trend as investment fund, many people would try to have wide outlook in art and it can emerge as the pop culture in Korea. But, although the art is relatively desirable kind of investment fund in selling market, people should be careful not to addict in making profit by selling their paintings or dreaming of making fortune. First of all, to maintain art as desirable one as a kind of investment fund in selling market, people should have their own firm outlook about paintings and artists. Due to no one can’t assure the painting’s future value, people should decide to buy or sell art with their trust to take any risk. Also, people should think that it isn’t a lottery, only a investment and enjoyment.

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Advanced EnglishIn-class essayProf. Annie Choi213. 12. 151346001 Kim Yu Jin

There is validity in the opinion that smokers do damage to non-smokers. But in company, it’s not always true that smokers do damage to company’s profit or smokers can’t get good outcomes. Person who has proficient working and personal ability and gets the greatest outcomes in the company can be a smoker. If company decide to stop permitting smoking in the company only due to the non-smokers’ view, it would oppress smokers’ right. And if the company have hard regulation about smoking, it could lower the smoking employee’s working ability. So, the company has to have the appropriate regulation for both smoking and non-smoking employees. First, smoking employees can smoke only at outside rest areas. To keep this regulation, the company may have to prepare rest area at outside, before. And in the usual rest area inside the company, both smoking and non-smoking employees can rest and talk without smoking. By doing this, non-smokers doon’t need to harm from smoking smell. Also, smoking employees can keep their right to smoke and also get along with non-smoking employees in the inside rest area for every employees. Second, smoking employees can smoke only at lunch or dinner time. If they go out to smoke whenever they want, other employees can’t get attention to work and feel upset for smoking smell. So, smoking employees should smoke only at lunch or dinner time, about 50 minutes to 1 hour ,which is sufficient to get rid of smoking smell. Of course, some might argue that this regulation to permit employees to smoke only in fixed time is too heartless, So, once smoking employees observe well this rule, and other employees think they can get attention and comfortably work better than before keeping this rule, the company would make more permitted tome to smoke for smoking employees.

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Third, the company may offer benefits when smoking employees quit smoking. Employees spend about 8-10 hours in company every day, so company has more meaning than just workplace for them. As employees devote themselves to work in the company, the company also should care the company's employees’ health. So, when smoking employee quit smoking, the company would offer benefit for him. By doing this, many employees may quit the smoking and work more hard with high satisfactory, and the company would make healthy working environment. Smoking is one of the most controversial issues in many places like school, home, university, company, and elsewhere. Among them, especially, company is the place that it's employees are all adults and in this place, and it also means that the percentage of smokers can be higher than other places. So, in the company, smoking problem would be more critical than other places. So, In company, by getting these three regulations, we can alleviate the smoking problem. And if these regulations get affirmative outcome, many other places also get their own regulations of smoking. Finally, the smoking problem would be alleviated in almost everywhere.