书面表达 ——

仔细审题

巧妙谋篇精心表达

假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”（ Whom do you turn to when in trouble? ） 的调查活动，调查结果如下表。请用英语给校报 编辑写一封信反映相关内容。 求助对象 比例 理 由 同学、朋友 58% 年龄相仿，容易理解与交流 老师、家长 30% 有爱心、有经验、可以信任 无 12% 不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通

注意： 1 ．内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了 使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。 2 ．词数： 150 词左右。

the key points in analysing the topic

假如你是刘芳，你的美国笔友 Bob 在网上见到下面的漫画，向你询问其含义。请用英语写一封 150 词左右的 e-mail ，内容如下： 1 ．简要描述漫画； 2 ．解读该生放弃高考的可能原因； 3 ．谈谈你个人的观点。

The young man has reluctantly( 不情愿地 ) given up the coming college entrance examination and he feels very sad.

1) He has to find a job and support himself.2) It seems no use going on to college.

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根据上图信息，请以“ Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents” 为题，用英语写一篇 150 词左右的短文。要求如下：1 ．简要描述图中信息；2 ．说明原因，如：忙于学习或工作、由于代沟 (generation gap) 而缺少共同话题……；3 ．谈谈你的看法。

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下面柱状图 (bar chart) 显示了不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况。 Time spent in talking with parents

It is well done in designing and organizing!

在谋篇布局时就要考虑到落笔时须分段落写作 , 才能脉络清楚 , 条理分明。

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捕捉要点扩展成句

连句成文纠错誊写

points

sentences

article

2009 年 6 月，江苏省教育厅做出决定：严禁中小学利用暑假和双休日补课。引起了社会各界强烈的反响。请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语给某报社写一封信。 赞同的观点： 反对的观点： 你的感想1.中小学生的睡眠时间可以得到保证，有充沛的精力投入学

习2.有利于他们自我发展3.可以利用休息日，参与一些

社区服务，增强公共服务意识

1.中小学生缺乏自控力，不 善于合理安排空余时间

2.上课时间少会导致成绩差 .目前的考试体制不变，学生难以应付这种激烈的竞争

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注意： 1 、信必须对所给要点逐一陈述，可作适当发挥；至少表达 2 点个人感想；信的内容不能涉及考生姓名和所在班级。 2 、词数 150 左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

List the important points!

1.保证睡眠时间2.投入学习3.自我发展4.社区服务5.公共服务意识 6. 缺乏自控力7.合理安排时间8. 时间少，成绩差 9. 考试体制10.激烈竞争11. 你的感想

ensure sleeping time devote oneself to studyself-developmentcommunity workawareness of public servicelack self-controlarrange time properlyless class time, low grades examination systemfierce competitionyour opinion

1.ensure sleeping time Many people support this decision for they think it will ensure the sleeping time of students in middle and primary schools.2.devote oneself to studyThey will be energetic enough to devote themselves to their study.3.self-developmentIt will be beneficial to their self-development. 4.community work5.awareness of public serviceThey can participate in community work and strengthen their awareness of public service.

扩展成句

6.lack self-control7.arrange time properlyThe students lack self-control to arrange their free time properly. 8.less class time, low grades They believe less class time may result in low grades. 9.examination system10.fierce competitionSince the present examination system hasn’t been changed, it’s difficult for them to cope with such fierce competition. 11.your opinionPersonally, the decision is quite good.

扩展成句

Wonderful sentences are sure to add colour to your writing!

1. 我们可能会受同学的影响，不能集中精力学习了。A .We may be affected by our classmates and can’t study hard. B. we may be disturbed by our classmates, in which case we can’t focus on our study.2. 直到多年之后我才发现他的友谊对我来说意味着什么。A. Not until many years later did I find what his friendship meant to me.B. I found the meaning of his friendship many years later .

A. It will not be long before I meet my good friend again.B. I will see my good friend again soon.

A． Though we worked hard, the manager wasn’t pleased with me. B ． Hardworking as we are, the manager is by no means satisfied with us.

3. 过不了多久我就会再见到我的好朋友的。

4.虽然我们已经很努力了，但是经理对我们一点也不满意。

A. It is universally acknowledged that trees are of great importance to us.B. We all know trees are very important to us.

5. 全世界都知道树木对我们是非常重要的。

非谓语动词，with复合结构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语从句，名词性从句，状语从句等。

To better your sentences, try to use——

平时关注课文中的复杂句型，勤记并活用所学各种句型。

友情提醒

显然，知识在我们的一生中起着非常重要的作用。

It is obvious that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

Obviously, knowledge is of great importance in our life.

It is clear that knowledge plays an important part in our life.

What is obvious is that knowledge is very important in our life.

她的脸上总是挂着微笑，这使我印象深刻。

What impresses me most is that there is always a smile on her face.

She is always wearing a smile on her face, which impresses me deeply.

The smile on her face leaves a deep impression on me.

My deep impression is that she is always smiling.

我收到邀请已有三天了，但不知道该不该去赴宴。

I received the invitation three days ago, but I wonder whether I should go to dinner.

It is three days since I received the invitation, but I don’t know whether to accept it or not.

I have had the invitation for three days. However, I don’t know whether I should go to dinner.

因为老师的及时救助，地震中许多孩子的生命得到挽救。

Many children were saved in the earthquake because there was the timely help of the teachers.

But for/without the timely help of the teachers, many children would not have been saved in the earthquake.

Helped by the teachers in time, many children were saved in the earthquake.

常用句型需要积累，在笔记本里开辟专门区域记录好句子，做个有心人！

友情提醒

巧用关联词语 (Linking words)

1 ）表示平行或选择关系 as well as, together with, not only…but also..., rather than2 ）表示转折关系 however, in spite of, otherwise, while3 ）表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...4 ）表示因果关系 therefore, as a result (of), owing to, due to, thanks to.

连句成文

5 ）表示时间、顺序关系 firstly, …secondly, …,for one thing ... for another, eventually6 ）表示递进、强调关系what’s more, in addition, worse still, moreover, furthermore, above all7 ）表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on8 ）表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion

2007 年 4 月 29日上午 10 点到 11 点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省 1 ， 100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部倡导学生： ◆ 每天锻炼一小时 ◆ 健康工作五十年 ◆ 幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意： 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。 词数： 120 左右。发言稿开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：阳光体育活动—— a national student sports program; 教育部—— the Ministry of Education

The Ministry of Education( 教育部 ) calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, _____________they will have good health to work fifty years and _____________ enjoy the whole life.

therefore

furthermoreon the contrary

otherwise

in short

however

写作时有意识提醒自己插入恰当关联词语。

友情提醒

纠错誊写注意时态语态人称是否正确 ,词数是否符合要求 ,是否有破句等。修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定区域，卷面要整洁清爽。

仔细审题

巧妙谋篇精心表达

Summary

（ NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT)• 口头通知：• Ladies and Gentlemen,• May I have you attention please?• 正 文• 书面通知：• NOTICE• In celebration of May Day , there will be ---

• 正 文• School Office• April 25th , 2000

通知、通告

申请信、求职信• 必备词汇 :apply position qualified （合格的） interview

qualification （资格） contact （联系） advertise consider student’s union reply vacancy ( 空缺 )

• 提分句型1 ） I think I ‘m the right person for the job you advertised2) I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of sales

manager3 ） Thanks for considering my application and I am looki

ng forward to your reply.4) If you need to know any more about me ,please contac

t me at 92348885) I am writing in response to your advertisement for a se

cretary.

参考模板一• Feb 1,2011• Dear …• I ‘m writing to apply for … here is my person

al information for you .• ……….• If my application could be taken into consid

eration, I would be most grateful. And your early reply will be highly appreciated.

• Yours sincerely • LiHua

参考模板二• Feb 1,2011• Dear …• I ‘m writing this letter to express my great interest

in ….., and I ‘d like to apply as….• ……• I would be very grateful if you grant me an intervie

w.• Yours sincerely • LiHua

参考模板三• Sept 1, 2011 • Dear ….• I write this letter to apply for this position that you ha

ve advertised in …..• I am sure that I meet the qualifications you specified

in your ads. I am a …, and I have …. I have also…• Thank you for your favorable consideration of my ap

plication. I am looking forward to your prompt reply. • • Yours sincerely • LiHua

Practise: 假设你是新华中学学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。1.表示感兴趣2.说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历3.希望得到回复注意： 1. 词数： 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear sir or Madam:

I’m a student from XinHua Middle School. I’m glad to learn that

you want a few part-time English reporters. I’m quite interested in it.

I think I’m fit for the job. As a student, I’ve read a lot and have

much knowledge in many fields. I’m fond of English and do well in

both speaking and writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and

enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a

reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I’m sure I can do the

job well if I get the position.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

感谢信参考模板• Dear…• Thank you very much for your lecture

about …. We all feel very grateful for what you did for us.

• ………• Thank you again and we hope have th

e opportunity to repay your kindness.• Yours sincerely

• Li Hua

普通信件参考• Dear ….• We are so glad to have received your

letter from the USA. I’m writing to tell you …….

• ……..• Best wishes / all the best wishes

• Yours • Li Hua