ba i pha n ti ch
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Topic: When choosing a job, the salary is the most importantconsideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered .
Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when
deciding on a career because I believe that other factors are equally important.
On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to
meet their basic needs . For example, we all need money to pay for housing,
food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at
least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable
quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-
financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and
musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but
that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and
raise a family.
Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as
what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in
a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good
manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to
workers levels of happiness and general quality of life . Secondly, many
peoples feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements,
the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they
earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others
and contribute something positive to society.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect peoples choice of profession, I do
not believe that money outweighs all other motivators .
(275 words, band 9)
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Bi phn tch
1/ C !
u trc:! bi essay ny, th "y Simon # ch $n cch phn tch c % hai m &t # #'( c nu ra) ph "n #* bi. M +t cch c , th - , ) ph "n thn bi, thn bi 1 # #'( c dng #- nu ln . ki/ n c 0a th "y v* vi1c nhi *u ng '2 i hi1n nay #&t m 3c thu nh 4p ngh * ltiu ch quan tr $ng nh 5t #- quy / t #6nh xem h $ c nn lm ngh * # hay khng,m+t . m th "y khng #7ng tnh. ! ph "n thn bi 2 th "y l8i quay ng '( c l8i . chnh c 0a mnh #7ng th 2 i l . chnh c 0a c % bi v 9n ( # #'( c #* c4p #/ n ) cu
thesis statement cu cu : i c0a m ) bi). V ; i vi1c s < d , ng c 5u trc #%o ng '( c,nevertheless, #7ng th 2 i nu ln lu 4n #i- m tri ng '( c ) thn bi 1, v tnh lmcc lu 4n #i- m #'( c nu trong ph "n thn bi 2 n c c %m gic n &ng h =n, vquan tr $ng h =n. >y l m +t cch vi / t r 5t hay trong tr '2 ng h ( p b 8n khng mu : ndnh c % bi ch ? ni v * m +t . ki/ n duy nh 5t, v b 8n mu : n lm n @i b4t ln . chnhc0a bi.
2/ Ng " php:
Bn c 8nh cc c 5u trc ng A php c 9n b %n nh ' passive voice, conditionalsentence hay complex sentence, cn c m +t s : #i- m ng A php cc b 8n nn l ' u. :
Khng dng cc d 8ng rt g $n nh ' dont, wont. Khng dng all people, everybody, I, you m thay vo # l most people,
etc.
Khuy / n khch cc b 8n dng cc synonyms v antonyms #- vocabulary
#'( c #a d 8ng h =n.o V d ! : Thay v ni b 8n khng thch/ #7ng . g # (I do not like it, I do
not agree with it) th nn dng dislike, disagree, etc. ( ! ph "n nypage # c 1 bi post h '; ng d Bn cc b 8n nn s < d , ng cc t C hay
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c , m t C formal no #- th - hi1n s D khng #7ng . , cc b 8n xem l 8inh).
S < d , ng cc transitional words: however, nevertheless, on the one hand,etc.
Dng prefix v suffix (cc b 8n nn nghin c 3u k E v suffix v prefix khngph %i mu : n dng sao c Fng #'( c v r 5t d G sai).
o V d ! : non-financial, etc.
Dng phrase thay v clause.
o V d ! : I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration
when deciding on a career .
3/ Vocabulary:
The size of the salary offered: M3c l '= ng #'( c #* ngh 6 The key consideration: V5n #* #ng quan tm nh 5tConsider it a priority: Xem #i*u g # quan tr $ng h =n nh Ang #i*u cn l 8iCareer path: Con #'2 ng s D nghi 1pCertainly affect peoples choice: Ch Hc ch Hn %nh h ') ng #/ n s D lDa ch $n c 0anhi*u ng '2 iOutweigh all other motivators: N&ng h =n/quan tr $ng h =n cc y / u t : cn l 8i
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