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• 任何語言都一樣，在我們腦海中是以片語存在的，而不是單字。

• 某些字總會和特定的字在一起，不可學喬太守，亂點鴛鴦譜。

• 寫作猶如扮演紅娘，「用字遣詞」- Diction and Syntax，要合乎語法及慣用法，不能亂牽紅線，直接將表面字相似的中文單字英文單字湊在一起。

• 因為各國語言都一樣，同一字詞會有多重意義。

Culture is the habit of being pleased with the best and knowing why.

Diction and Syntax

我愛紅娘Diction & Syntax

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• 任何語言都一樣，在我們腦海中是以片語存在的，而不是單字。

• 某些字總會和特定的字在一起，不可學喬太守，亂點鴛鴦譜。

• 寫作猶如扮演紅娘，「用字遣詞」- Diction and Syntax，要合乎語法及慣用法，不能亂牽紅線，直接將表面字相似的中文單字英文單字湊在一起。

• 因為各國語言都一樣，同一字詞會有多重意義。


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中文味，怎麼來的?


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學術不難學美不易Culture is the habit of being pleased with the best and knowing why.

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主詞Subject, S

(不)及物動詞(In)Transitive

Verb, Vt,i

受詞Object, O

主，受詞補語Subject Complement, SCObject Complement, OC

形容詞(adj)修飾語 Modifiers

副詞(adv)修飾語 Modifiers

I am a teacher.

I was devastated.

I was deeply devastated.

He made her devastated.

He made her badly devastated.

The bright sun rises.

The bright sun rises slowly.

I love her.

I gave her a book.

五顏六色句子結構分析

5-block-6-color analysis of sentence structure

8Culture is the habit of being pleased with the best and knowing why.

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機車若加裝防鎖死煞車系統(ABS)可自動調整煞車力的大小，防

止車輪鎖死，得到最好的煞車效果，並能確保操縱穩定性。

It can automatically adjust the brake force to prevent the wheels

from locking for achieving optimal braking effect and ensuring

operation stability if a motorcycle is equipped with an anti-lock

braking system.

Equipped with an anti-lock braking system (ABS), a motorcycle can

automatically adjust the braking force to prevent the wheels from

locking, achieve optimal braking effects and ensure operational

stability.


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5-Block-6-Color Analysis

兩句都合乎5-Block-6-Color句子結構，為何第一句，會有中文味?

請注意以下各點：

1. 語意邏輯：it 代名詞，代替什麼? 指什麼? 它會調整(adjust)，它是

motorcycle還是anti-lock braking system? 兩者離太遠了。

2. 套用中文：如果= if。if: 不一定會發生。整句按照中文: 如果…就可以…

3. 分詞構句：善用分詞構句，-ed, 或 –ing。這是蛻變之一。分詞構句表

示原因：裝了…，機車可以…。不是如果。

4. 重點先提：當一個句子很多概念時，重要的排前面。例如本句的ABS


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兩句都合乎5-Block-6-Color句子結構，為何第一句，會有中文味?

請注意以下各點：

5. 避免重複：雖然用了代名詞it，語意上還是有點重複。It…, if a

motorcycle。用分詞構句，即可避免重複。

6. 善用 and：將同性質的敘述，整理在一起，用對等連接詞and連接。

而且用and所連接的詞性要一致。第一句adjust… and

ensuring，詞性不致。

7. 整理對稱：將同性質的敘述，整理在一起，如第二句，用and連接

prevent,…, achieve,…, and ensure


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為何會有中文味?

因為寫作力不成熟。包括：內容沒按起承轉合，先將文章整體大架構

(Macrostructure)安排整理好。否則雜亂無章、避重就輕、偷工減料、因陋

就簡、或不符文法(不符5-block-6-color)而失去信達雅。

1. 安排架構：內容沒按起承轉合，先將文章整體大架構(Macrostructure)

從前言到結論，按序重組整理好，以免雜亂無章。

2. 不厭其煩：要將整段文章語意及語氣充分了解，例如，轉折的語氣，

前因後果，來籠去脈，要交待清楚。

3. 五顏六色：不要忘了句子基本結構，將寫了很長的片語誤以為是句子，

自認很清楚，其實少了動詞，別人讀起來，就不知所云了。


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5-Block-6-Color Analysis - 猶如染色體，有缺陷的DNA立現

1. 安排架構：

解繳軍種的物料，除了需包裝防護之外，另一個重點就是須標示清楚。

因此產生標籤的製作需求。

Package protection is necessary before the goods are handed over to customers,

and the clear labeling is another key point.

The demand of making label is thus generated.

In addition to package protection, clear labeling is critical to ensure good delivery

to customers.

Consequently, customer and regulatory label demands are on the rise.


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2. 不厭其煩：

隨著3GPP第五代(5G)新空中介面(New Radio, NR4)規範第一版的完成，研

究下一代重點應該轉向無線行動通訊發展。

With the completion of the first edition of the 3GPP 5G/NR specification, the next

step in research should be shifted to the development of wireless mobile

communication.

Upon completion of the first edition of the 3GPP/NR specification, the following

steps of research will emphasize future development of wireless mobile

communications (WMC).


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3. 五顏六色：

In addition, the Reynolds number at the transition or the transition or the critical

region which makes the flow pattern unstable.

The highly compact designed system which incorporates sophisticated flight

control computers and electro-optical payloads.

The command and control processes across all levels of command in planning

and executing operations from a tactical battlefield level to achieve the

anticipate effects of preemptive and preventive war action.


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語言表達差異，文化差異 - - 轉譯

Taiwan is in a state of diplomatic and economic difficulty due to a dilemma

between china and US.

又由於台灣夾於中、美兩大國武力較量平衡棋子，導致我國不論在外交、經濟

等國際地位弱勢。

As a chess of military wrestling between the U.S. and P.R.C., the situation is harshfor us in diplomatic and economy.

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語言表達差異，文化差異 - - 轉譯

身為中科院的一份子，是否感受到這榮耀的時刻，所謂「休戚相關，榮辱與

共」，如是也。

As members of NCSIST during this glorious time, we have come to see NCSIST as

more than a company; it has forever become a part of our identity.

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小心套用成語 - - 成衣很少合身，罐頭不如自己烹調

A nagging fear that America's decline is inevitable, that the next generation

must lower its sights. - Obama, 2009

We absolutely cannot leave the hot potato issues and heavy burdens to the next generation. - Ma Ying-jeou, 2016

Help young people overcome difficulties, achieve generational justice, and deliver to the next generation a better country. (X) - Tsai Ing-wen, 2016

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小心套用成語 - - 成衣很少合身，罐頭不如自己烹調

Help young people overcome difficulties, achieve generational justice, and deliver to the next generation a better country. (X) - Tsai Ing-wen, 2016

Help young people overcome difficulties, achieve generational justice, and deliver a better country to the next generation (O) - Tsai Ing-wen, 2016

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邏輯與語病

複雜的事情簡單做，你就是專家。(馬雲)

Making the complex simple is an expert. (x)

因安裝於極地氣候區，格陵蘭天線系統必須禁得起攝氏零下73度的低溫。

Installed in polar climate, the Greenland telescope system must survive at temperature lower than -73℃. (x)


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邏輯與語病

複雜的事情簡單做，你就是專家。(馬雲)

An expert makes the complex simple.

因安裝於極地氣候區，格陵蘭天線系統必須禁得起攝氏零下73度的低溫。

Installed in polar climate regions, the Greenland telescope system must survive at temperature lower than -73℃.


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邏輯與語病

無人機可以大幅保障戰機飛行員人身安全 (x)

UAV can be used to replace manned fighters to significantly reduce risks to human pilots for conducting specific missions.


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A chameleon has an ability to change color. (O) (x)

Chameleons are animals that change color. (O) (x)


A chameleon is an animal to change color. . (O) (x)


邏輯與語病

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不可亂點鴛鴦譜 - - 小心求證


小心求證，要求甚解

In celebration of ASRD’s 80th anniversary, as a member of ASRD during this

honorable time, we’ve been impressed with a sense of identity being in ASRD,

haven’t we?

We are honored to be in ASRD during this glorious time.

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◼ In celebration of ASRD’s 80th anniversary, as a member of ASRDduring this honorable time, we’ve been impressed with a sense ofidentity being in ASRD, haven’t we? –

◼ We’re honored to be here today embracing the gloriousachievements in ASRD…

◼ 很清楚的，during this honorable time, 在這「光榮的」時刻。「人」或是「單位，團體」不是用「光榮的」形容；反之，一件光榮的「事」就對了。這不是英文文法的問題，而是語語語意邏輯的問題。

◼ We’re honored to be here,我們「感到很榮幸」，今天能够…

◼ 此與之前寫過的interesting 和interested 實異曲同工，爾等歸納之，可得也。


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When we return to our jobs, we quietly announced our solidarity with the dead and the wounded, and we quietly defend the simple dignity of work.

此句為911後，返回工作的人們，對罹難者的哀悼詞內容之一。此句中的defend為何意?

Defend our homeland: 防禦，保衛

Defend her husband in front of her daughters: 辯護

Defend the right to demonstrate: (極力)爭取，要求，取得

Defend well throughout the game: 後衛

The defending champion: 衛冕

Top lawyers to defend him: (律師)辯護


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熟悉陷阱(familiarity trap)

小心求證

一個只重視有錢人的國家，其榮景不會長久。

The nation cannot prosper long when it favors only the prosperous.

繁榮是屬於用最快速度學到新事物的人。(x)

Prosperity belongs to those who learn new things the fastest. - Pilzer, 2019

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熟悉陷阱(familiarity trap)

小心求證

一個只重視有錢人的國家，其榮景不會長久。

The nation cannot prosper long when it favors only the prosperous.

成功(賺大錢)是屬於用最快速度學到新事物的人。(O)

Prosperity belongs to those who learn new things the fastest. - Pilzer, 2019

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我愛紅娘 – 紅娘不可牽錯紅線

台灣師範大學

National Taiwan Normal University

常態分配

Normal distribution

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nor‧mal /ˈnɔːməl $ ˈnɔːr-/ adjective

Usual, typical, or expected

A normal working week is 40 hours.

It’s normal to feel nervous before an exam.

par‧a‧digm /ˈpærədaɪm/ noun [countable]

a model or example that shows how something works or is produced

the basic paradigm of the family tree

a very clear or typical example of something

Pius XII remained the paradigm of what a pope should be.

我愛紅娘 – 紅娘不可牽錯紅線

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為何會有中文味? 沒符合Corpus and Collocations

Expression Diction and Syntax

Corpus and Collocations

造句 and 造詞

Google: 單字 longman

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Articulate

Articulateness & Articulation

口齒清晰(to articulate)包含兩個層次：

◼發音(pronunciation)和說明(explanation)。

◼發音要字正腔圓，Articulation. (另解：連接，關節)

◼說明要條理分明，清楚明白，Articulateness.

◼讓聽者完全聽懂你講的意思。

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去中文味

Corpus and Collocations

◼ Every word in English has certain words that more frequently go together with that words.

◼ We remember and retain language in our mind primarily in phrases, therefore we should learn language in phrases.

◼ If you speak and write in phrases that native speakers expect to hear you say or write, native speakers will understand you better, and you will speak and write more specifically, naturally, and professionally.

- James, Nov. 25, 2015

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1. With the increasingly rapid development of quantum computing,

the public key crypto system might be decrypted in a quick way that

has caused extensive attention and corresponding countermeasures

worldwide.

2. Being small volume and high power, the rotary engine is commonly

used to power small to medium UAV.

3. Taking advantage of addressing these practical issues associated

with our long-term user experience, your company can improve and

develop products from service marketing perspective.


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4. It’s been nearly two decades that the PW-800 engine has been used

to power the Lark UAV.

5. We are looking forward to continually collaborating with each other

in a good relationship having been created.


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we are benefiting from its extensive application that intimately connected to our daily lives.

At this inspiring moment, we’re honored to experience the forum taking place in NCSIST embracing the achievements of Super TaiRa we are being proud of.


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We truly appreciated PW’s assistance services for such a long period of time.

As users of PW800 engine, we would strongly express the extreme dissatisfaction with such issues that PW should have faced and managed to tackle.


On behalf of AC company and as director of the Lark UAV project, I was regretful for the PW indifference to such a long-term and loyal client.

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We can no longer afford indifference to the suffering outside our borders, nor can we consume the world's resources without regard to effect. - Obama

我們再也不能漠視境外受苦的人們，也不能毫不顧後果的消耗世界的能源。

With the ever-increasing speed of technological change, we all need to stay up-to-date with new equipment. - Shirley


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Not everybody is in a situation where the opportunity to teach opens,

nor is everyone good at teaching or enjoying it. - Porter

The emphasis many companies place on reliability is so crucial to achieving high product reliability that it can no longer be viewed as just one way of gaining a competitive advantage. - Charles


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Impeccable breeding is unmistakable

im‧pec‧ca‧ble /ɪmˈpekəbəl/ adjective SYN perfect

without any faults and impossible to criticize

She has taught her children impeccable manners.

a bar with impeccable service


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bree‧ding /ˈbriːdɪŋ/ noun [uncountable] BABY/HAVE A BABY

when animals produce babies

Open-sea fish lay several million eggs each breeding season.

the fact of coming from a family of high rank and having polite social behavior

The young lieutenant had an air of wealth and good breeding.


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un‧mis‧ta‧k‧a‧ble /ˌʌnməˈsteɪkəbəl/ adjective

Easy to recognize

the unmistakable sound of gunfire

The similarity is slight, but unmistakable


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系出名門無懈可擊


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五顏六色英文句子結構分析創新理論

(new paradigm)

實務 - - 師資與教材

理論！教與學

目前英文學習一般典範(normal

paradigm)

典範轉移 - Paradigm Shift

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徹底改變傳統規範式(prescriptive)的單字與文法學習，以培育種子

教師的方式，應用本篇《五顏六色英文句子結構分析》創新理論

之教學方法論(methodology)，此謂「典範轉移」。

2錯：

⚫ Single item vocabulary (背單字)

⚫ Grammar (學文法)

3痛：

⚫ 聽不懂看不懂考不好

去2錯3痛 2030雙語國家政策發展藍圖


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Create an Established and

Elegant Writing Style

Reputation for Established and Elegant Style

Elegance is an attitude


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Thank You


We can no longer afford indifference to the suffering outside our borders, nor can weconsume the world's resources without regard to effect


President Barack Obama's first inauguration speech: Full text (1)

no longer: 不再= not… any longer we can not afford indifference any longer to the…

can afford vt.(1) 付得起。 to have enough money to buy or pay for something.We can’t afford to go on vacation this year. 我們今年沒錢渡假。 can’t afford to, 付不起。 We can’t afford to buy a car.(2) 不能做某事。if you cannot afford to do something, you must not do it because it could cause serious problems for you

indifference n. lack of interest or concern. 缺乏興趣或關心, 漠視indifference to 對…漠視suffering adj. 受苦的 the+adj.= plural noun 複數名詞, the suffering 受苦的人們(pl)outside our borders, outside prep. 在…之外 border n. 邊界, outside our borders: 在我們境外。 50

We can no longer afford indifference to the suffering outside our borders, nor can weconsume the world's resources without regard to effect


President Barack Obama's first inauguration speech: Full text (2)

nor can we…, 否定詞 nor置於句首，其後主詞與助動詞要對調 (不是nor we can)can no…, nor 不能…, 也不能。can not…, nor

con-sume vt. to use time, energy, goods etc 使用時間, 能源, 東西(物品) , 消費, 消耗。re-sour-ce n. 資源

regard n. attention or consideration that is shown towards someone or something對某人或某事的注意或考慮。管, 在乎with regard to 關於, 對於without regard to 不在乎

effect n. 效果, 影響, 結果,。without regard to effect , 不顧後果affect vt. 影響 (某人或某事)The divorce affected every aspect of her life. 離婚使她的生活各方面都受到影響。

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