clarity 08:combine conciseness and clarity (結合"精確寫作"及"明白寫作" )

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    Unit Eight :Combine Conciseness and Clarity

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    ? Accurate prediction of the

    boundary parameters bymathematicians is of heavy

    emphasis.

    : Mathematicians heavilyemphasize accurately predicting

    the boundary parameters.

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    ? An outline of how to install the

    software program is made in thefollowing section.

    : The following sectionoutlines how to install the

    software program.

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    ? A thorough description of the

    environmental impact on the ozonelayer was made by Smith (1985).

    : Smith (1985) thoroughlydescribed the environmental

    impact on the ozone layer.

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    ? Contributing factors to

    rainforest depletion includeoverpopulation.

    : Overpopulationcontributes to rainforest

    depletion.

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    ? No significant variation between

    the two temperatures occurred.

    : The two temperatures didnot significantly vary.

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    ? It is impossible to forecast all

    potential workplace hazards.

    : All potential workplacehazards can not be forecasted.

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    ? Adjustment of the parameters is

    unnecessary by the controlengineer.

    : The control engineerdoes not need to adjust the

    parameters.

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    ? A significant decline in the

    investment return occurred.

    : The investment returnsignificantly declined.

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    ? The investigator made the

    suggestion that there is a closerelation between the two conditions.

    : The investigatorsuggested that the two

    conditions are closely related.

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    ? There is a necessity for a

    compromise on the proposal byboth parties.

    : Both parties mustcompromise on the proposal.

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