dist model essay p2

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DISTINCTION IN ENGLISH Primary Two

Model Essays

Revision Paper 4

After dinner, Tom went to the kitchen and opened

the refrigerator. He picked out the most delicious and

crunchy-looking apple and took a large bite. To his surprise, he

felt something moving on his hand. A worm wriggled out of

the apple! Feeling disgusted, he threw the apple onto the

floor. More worms began crawling out. His mother entered the

kitchen and almost gave her son a tongue-lashing for wasting

food. However, Tom pointed to the apple and she realised

that he did not deserve to be reprimanded. She gave him a

big hug to comfort him and took him out for some ice-cream.

Revision Paper 5

Jack had a high fever. His father took him to a hospital to see

a doctor. After alighting from the taxi, his anxious father carried

him into the hospital. As he had a high temperature, Jack felt

uncomfortable and absolutely miserable. The nurse placed an

ice pack on his head and gave him some medicine but the fever

refused to subside. The doctor gave him an injection to bring



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down his fever. Jack screamed in pain. However, when his little

sister came to visit him with a balloon and his favourite soft-toy,

he cheered up immediately.

Revision Paper 6

The sun was shining brightly in the sky. An old lady was

taking a stroll in the park with the aid of her walking stick. She

failed to notice a banana skin on the ground so she slipped and fell

when she stepped on it. She landed on the ground with a deafening

thud. Her elbows started bleeding and her fruits and vegetables

were strewn everywhere. Jane, who was jogging in the park,

stopped to help the old lady. The onlookers who witnessed Jane’s

act of kindness praised her.

Revision Paper 10

Ken is a lazy and disobedient boy. He does not like to do

his homework and watches television all day long instead. One day,

he was watching his favourite cartoon. He told his mother that he

had no homework, so she let him watch television. However, when

his mother asked him to have his dinner, he ignored her because

he was too engrossed in the programme. Finally, she decided to

switch off the television. Just then, she spotted Ken’s unfinished



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homework on the coffee table. She was furious and disciplined

Ken with a cane for his laziness and disobedience.

Revision Paper 11

It was a busy day at the noisy construction site. Many

workmen wearing helmets were moving around, carrying heavy

concrete bricks. Old Mrs Tan was on her way to the market. She

decided to take a shortcut through the construction site. As she

could not read English, she ignored the danger sign in front of the

site. Just then, a pile of bricks fell from a half-completed building.

Fortunately, an alert foreman saved Mrs Tan from a tragic accident

by pushing her away in the nick of time. Mrs Tan was very grateful

to him for saving her life.

Revision Paper 12

Adrian was reading a library book one afternoon. After

some time, he felt bored so he looked around his bedroom for

something else to do. His bedroom was very messy with clothes,

toys and socks strewn everywhere. His eyes lit up in glee when

he spotted some crayons. He started vandalising the book by

drawing on the pages. When his mother came in and saw what he

was doing, she was furious. She gave him a tongue-lashing for

destroying public property.

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