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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
AFL
Evaluating PeerWork
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
Name Bridie Lacy
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
Activity 1
Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces ofwork. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible youshould use a best fit model this means that you take an overall view rather thanharshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples
and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the!"#$%! &'(')$"!
NON STOP POP
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
framin a s!ot"
incl#din and
e$cl#din
elements as
appropriate
%ye contact
&ein made
wit! t!e
readers
#sin a variety of
s!ot distances as
appropriate
'!ere is a
rane in variety
t minimal
li!tin s!owns!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( set
'!ere is no
variation in
s!ots only &asic
s(ills are s!own
to !ave &een
#sedselectin mise)en)
sc*ne incl#dincolo#r" +#re"
li!tin" o&,ects
and settin
'!e individ#al
is too close #pto !ave a mise
en scene
manip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!e
conte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-in
'!e si-in of
pict#res varies
t!ro#!o#t and
t!ey are
appropriate to
t!e content
acc#rately #sin
lan#ae andreister
'!e lan#ae
appliesappropriately
appropriately
interatin
ill#stration and
te$t
'e$t stands o#t
on t!e pae and
is reada&le for
t!e readerss!owin
#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and pae
desin
Paes are well
laid o#t and
spacin !as
&een ta(en into
considerations!owin
awareness of t!eneed for variety in
'!ere !as &een
a variation insi-ed fonts t!at
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fonts and te$t si-e are s!own#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
Lac(in in
p!oto s!op
s(ills to &e
s!own
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
FLAW&
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
framin a s!ot"
incl#din and
e$cl#din
elements as
appropriate
'!e pict#re is
appropriate to
t!e content t
it is o0 centre
and t!e
positionin of it
is wron#sin a variety of
s!ot distances as
appropriate
ariety of s!ots
#sed
t!ro#!o#t t!e
maa-ines!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( set
'!e pict#res
apply well to
t!e maa-ine
and o alon
appropriatelyselectin mise)en)
sc*ne incl#din
colo#r" +#re"
li!tin" o&,ects
and settin
A very dar(
and d#ll mise
en scene !ard
to see t!e
#ality wit!in
t!e pict#resmanip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!e
conte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-in
'!e p!otos are
s!own to &e
#ite small t
overall !ave a
ood aspect
a&o#t t!em
acc#rately #sin
lan#ae and
reister
'!e lan#ae
#sed wit!in t!e
content is
correct for t!e
taret a#dienceappropriately
interatinill#stration and
te$t
'e$t stands o#t
on t!e paescatc!in t!e
readers eyes!owin
#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and pae
desin
Pae desin
and layo#t is
applied
appropriately
and wor(s well
wit! t!e paes!owin
awareness of t!e
need for variety in
fonts and te$t si-e
Di0erent si-ed
font #sed
t!ro#!o#t
s!owin avariation
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#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
Minimal p!oto
s!op s(ills
s!own wit!in
t!is maa-ine
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STACK
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
framin a s!ot"incl#din and
e$cl#din
elements as
appropriate
No eye contactis &ein made
t t!is does
!ave a ood
pict#re layo#t
r#nnin
t!ro#!o#t it#sin a variety of
s!ot distances as
appropriate
All t!e pict#res
loo( very
similar t!ey
are lac(in in
di0erences and
t!ere is novariety
t!ro#!o#t t!e
maa-ines!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( set
All of t!e s!ots
s!own are
made
appropriate to
t!e content
wit!in itselectin mise)en)
sc*ne incl#din
colo#r" +#re"
li!tin" o&,ects
and settin
All t!e s!ots
re3ect t!e
maa-ine wit!
t!e ri!t mise
en scene to &e
s!ownmanip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!e
conte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-in
'!e si-in of
t!e font varies
t!ro#!o#t t!e
maa-ine and
is an
appropriate
si-e for t!e
a#dience to &ea&le to readacc#rately #sin
lan#ae and
reister
All t!e lan#ae
applies
appropriatelyappropriately
interatin
ill#stration and
te$t
'!e di0erent
te$ts ra& t!e
a#diences eye
s!owin
#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and paedesin
'!e font #sed is
#ite &orin
and old it is
lac(insomet!in news!owin Di0erent si-es
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awareness of t!e
need for variety in
fonts and te$t si-e
are s!own to
!ave &een #sed
#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
P!oto s!op
s(ills are at a
&are minim#m
t in certain
pict#res are
seen to !ave
&een #sed
S#mmary /omment
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
DUBZONE
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
framin a s!ot"incl#din and
e$cl#din
elements as
appropriate
ery simplisticLac( of
creativity
#sin a variety of
s!ot distances as
appropriate
S!ot o#t of
foc#s and not
on a #ality
levels!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( set
.t all is #ite
m#ddled not
relatin to t!e
contentselectin mise)en)
sc*ne incl#din
colo#r" +#re"
li!tin" o&,ects
and settin
Pict#res close
#p so mise en
scene cannot
&e seen
manip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!e
conte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-in
/roppin and
resi-in can &e
seen to of &een
#sed
t!ro#!o#t
acc#rately #sin
lan#ae and
reister
Lan#ae
applies
appropriatelyappropriately
interatin
ill#stration and
te$t
All ,#m&led
wit!in t!e
do#&le pae
spreads!owin
#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and pae
desin
4nderstandin
can &e seen
s!owin
awareness of t!e
need for variety in
fonts and te$t si-e
Di0erent font
si-es lac( of
#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
.ct can &e seen
to of &een #sed
to a minimal
level
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
Task 2
"ow using the skills youve ac*uired in task + evaluate yo! o"# "o!k a#$ t%e#
t"o pieces of "o!k f!om classmates. Use the space provided to give specificexamplesand write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.
&a'a(i#e title) A NAT*+E C,A-.OTTE C.*//O-D
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
framin a s!ot"
incl#din and
e$cl#din
elements as
appropriate
Pict#res are
s!own to &e of
a !i! #ality
and detail
#sin a variety of
s!ot distances asappropriate
Di0erent s!ots
!ave &een #sed
s!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( set
All appropriate
to t!e indie feel
selectin mise)en)
sc*ne incl#din
colo#r" +#re"
li!tin" o&,ects
and settin
Mise en scene
applies to +t in
wit! t!e
conte$t
manip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!econte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-in
All can &e seen
to of &een #sed
to a deree
acc#rately #sin
lan#ae and
reister
Lan#ae
reister applies
t!ro#!o#tappropriately
interatin
ill#stration and
te$t
All appropriate
to taret
a#dience
s!owin#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and pae
desin
4nderstandincan &e seen t
wit! room for
improvement
s!owin
awareness of t!e
need for variety in
fonts and te$t si-e
Font si-es vary
#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
.ct can &e seen
to of &een #sed
S#mmary /omment
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
&a'a(i#e title) P,OEN*0 S,ANNON ,AA-D
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
framin a s!ot"incl#din and
e$cl#din
elements as
appropriate
5ood #alitys!ots !ave
&een #sed and
framed well
#sin a variety of
s!ot distances as
appropriate
Di0erent s!ots
!ave &een #sed
t!ro#!#ts!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( set
Material applies
appropriately
selectin mise)en)
sc*ne incl#dincolo#r" +#re"
li!tin" o&,ects
and settin
Mise en scene
oes wit! t!et!eme of
maa-ine
manip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!e
conte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-in
/roppin and
resi-in can &e
seen to of &een
#sed
acc#rately #sin
lan#ae andreister
Lan#ae
reister appliesall t!ro#!o#t
appropriately
interatin
ill#stration and
te$t
All appropriate
to conte$t of
t!e maa-ine
s!owin
#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and pae
desin
4nderstandin
can &e seen
ood layo#t
s!owin
awareness of t!eneed for variety in
fonts and te$t si-e
5ood #se of
di0erent si-in
#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
/an &e seen
t!ro#!o#t
S#mmary /omment
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
&a'a(i#e title)
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
framin a s!ot"
incl#din ande$cl#din
elements as
appropriate#sin a variety of
s!ot distances as
appropriates!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( setselectin mise)en)
sc*ne incl#din
colo#r" +#re"li!tin" o&,ects
and settinmanip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!e
conte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-inacc#rately #sin
lan#ae and
reisterappropriately
interatin
ill#stration and
te$ts!owin
#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and pae
desins!owin
awareness of t!e
need for variety in
fonts and te$t si-e#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
'ask 3 'arget setting
4se t!e feed&ac( from yo#r classmates to set tarets to improve yo#r wor(64se t!e rid &elow to foc#s yo#r areas for improvement6 'ry to &e as speci+c
as possi&le and w!ere possi&le create one taret for eac! area of t!e mar(sc!eme6 Remem&er to &e realistic" t!at means ma(in s#re yo#r tarets areac!ieva&le and realistic for yo#r a&ility6
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&a'a(i#e title)
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 3
3"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 4
4%"0 marksframin a s!ot"
incl#din and
e$cl#din
elements as
appropriate#sin a variety of
s!ot distances as
appropriates!ootin material
appropriate to t!e
tas( set
selectin mise)en)sc*ne incl#din
colo#r" +#re"
li!tin" o&,ects
and settinmanip#latin
p!otorap!s as
appropriate to t!e
conte$t for
presentation"
incl#din croppin
and resi-in
acc#rately #sinlan#ae and
reisterappropriately
interatin
ill#stration and
te$ts!owin
#nderstandin of
conventions of
layo#t and pae
desin
s!owinawareness of t!e
need for variety in
fonts and te$t si-e#sin ./'
appropriately for
t!e tas( set
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded