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English Writing Course

THEME

Introduction

Do you like writing?

Yes----------------No

What’s going between?

My suggestion is …to read more…

to recite more…

to write more…

to imitate more…

to learn more…

words,sayings,paragraphs,passages,skills,stories,novels,etc.

Practice makes perfect.

Writing is nothing easy.

Essay writing is difficult, but following this course’s concrete guides will improve your writing skills and make it easier to create an original, coherent essay.

1 What is a good essay writing?

2 The Necessity of Learning English Writing3 How to Write Well in English?

CONTENTS

4 A Course Introduction

What is a good English Essay?

StandardHow to write an advanced sentence?

1

Necessity

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Effective Communication

Basic Requirement

Process of Discovery

Critical Thinking

2Why English Writing Is Important to You?

How?1

2

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Idiomatic English

Paraphrase and Imitate

Reading Passage

2 C Thinking

Polish the words

3 How to Write Well in English?

1 2

3 5

Descriptive Writing

Narrative Writing

Expository Writing

Applied Wriiting

4

4Argumentative Writing

What is a good English Essay?

right choice of words

well-written sentencesclear idea

good manuscript form

proper structure

well-written paragraphs

basic features

no grammarmistakes

arrangementword divisioncapitalizationpunctuationhandwriting

我绝对不会嫁给你 I will never marry you.

Never will I marry you.

You are the last man I am willing to marry.

Under no circumstances will I marry you.

If you were the last man in the world, I would definitely remain single !

How to write an advanced sentence?

How to Write Well in English?

1.Choosing a Reading Passage.

Interesting and original; Analyze the specific words, rhetoric devices and structure

The breeze just kissed the lake and stirred the trees.• 湖边微风习习。• 微风习习，吹皱湖面，拂动树梢。• What is youth?• Youth is not a time of life; it is a state of mind; it is not a matter of

rosy cheeks, red lips and supple knees; it is a matter of the will, a quality of the imagination, a vigor of the emotions; it is the freshness of the deep springs of life.

• --- Samuel Ullman• 青春不是年华，而是心境；青春不是桃面，丹唇，柔膝，而是深沉的意志，恢宏的想象，炽热的感情；青春是生命的源泉在不息的涌流。

2.Learn idiomatic English e.g. 丢硬币 赢了某人 报纸上 有人打电话找你

throw a coin X win somebody X on the newspaper X Somebody is calling you on the phone. X

toss a coin (BE) flip a coin (AE) win a game in the newspaper You are wanted on the phone.

•交通工具• transportation tools X• means of transportation

•宜人的气氛• the comfortable atmosphere X• the soothing atmosphere

• 感到浑身无力• feel no strengthX• feel wobbly

Learn to Paraphrase and Imitate

丰富人们的精神生活To enrich the spiritual lives of people.

To enrich the lives of people culturally and intellectually.

To satisfy the intellectual and cultural needs of people.

• Model sentence ：• Failure is the mother of success.

• 1. 幸运出自勤奋。• Diligence is the mother of good luck.

• 2. 饥饿是犯罪的源泉。• Hunger is the mother of crime.

• 3. 需求是创造之母。• Necessity is the mother of invention.

Polish the words

I had a good teacher who often

praised all of the students. Because of this good method, I eagerly answered all the questions I could, never worrying much about making mistakes. I was a good student for two years.

kind,patient,warm-hearted,gentle positive,effective

at the top of my class

4.

Creative Thinking

Critical Thinking

Habit-bound thinking

Stereotyped thinking

5.

Main Contents

1. Manuscript Form2. Diction in English Writing3. English Rhetoric4. English Sentence Writing5. English Paragraph Writing6. English Essay Writing7. English Applied Writing

Teaching ContentsTeaching Contents

• Full attendance• Active group study and participation • Writer briefcase( 作家公文包）• Well-done autonomic learning （自主学习）• E-learning platform 雅信达网络学习平台• 网址： 211.82.200.53 （仅限校园网）• Micro lecture （微课）• Login http://www.pigai.org/ ( 批改网）

Autonomic Learning

Performance EvaluationPerformance Evaluation

总成绩 =N （自主学习成绩 20%+ 作文测验 40% ） +2 （期末论文成绩 30%+ 课堂笔记 10% ）

Autonomic Learning Assignment

• Preview the Description Essay Writing P105-125

• Read sample3, sample5,sample8,sample9 and make PPT presentation based on its questions, purpose, organization, sentences and diction etc.

• Learn diction and sentence on E-learning platform

• Micro lecture learning about Diction

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