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ENTRY BARRIERS AND MARKET SEGMENTATION ISSUESWITHIN PLUG PLANT INDUSTRY OF UNITED KINGDOM

I refer to the external examiners report:-

Final grade 30%

Lack of clear focus and direction is evidenced in the title chosen

The real aim on page 5 is laudable but the research question is too ambitious

The style of presentation, e.g. referencing, is confused throughout

A clear effort has been expended, however the work is unfinished in its current form

Resubmission must be on the same topic

ye tha college feedback or ab briefme niche likha he

Isme jo title he us hisab se data nahi match ho rahe he or jo data liya he us hisab se analysis match nahiho raha he agar tum thik se read karoge na to tumko bhi malum ho jayega ki tumne ye kya banaya tha

Real aim or disseration question dono match nahi ho rahe he like dissertation question bahut amitious heor aim bahut basic, to tumhe iska aim amibitious banana padega kyunki agar question change karnejaoge na to pura data firse find karna padega so tum dissertation ka aim ek dam ambitious banado or badme us hisab se analysis kardo

Or sare chapter like is hisab se banao

6th

chapter karne he

1. Introduction

1.1 Back ground

1.2 Research aim

1.3 Research question

1.4 Stucture of thesis

Isme tumhe chapter 2,3,4,5,6, ka just introduction hi dena he sirf introduction ke is chapter me kya kya

hoga sirf vahi likhna he brief me

2. Literature review

3. Mathodology

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4. Data

Isme data hi mention karne he koi bi analysis mention nahi karna he sirf data hi ki tumne is dissertationke liyr kya kya reaserch kiya he sirf vahi mention karna he

5. Data analysis

6. Conclusion and recommandation

6.1 Findings 700 words

6.2 Conclusion 1000 words

6.3 Reccomandation 1000 words

Or last me jo refference he na use dissertation ke hisab se rakhna, last time dekhna dissertation kerefference dissertation se mil hi nahi rahe the like confusion tha refference samaj ne me to is bar achhitarah se karna

To is hisab se tumhe 6 chapter banane he samaj me a raha he na

Or ab tum jo banaoge vo ek dam naya hi banana purane me add or remove mat karna aisa he to jopurana he usme se tum copy karke data or jo kuchh lena he vo collect kar lena par ye formate karke is

hisab se tumhe pura naya hi dissertation prepare karna he

Or ye bat pehle bhi tumko bola tha agar tumne us time is mujab kar diya hota to aj dubara nahi bananapadta or hame resubmit ki 500 pound fees nahi pay karni padti

So please is bar thik se kar dena or muje ye before 15th

march submit karna he to please sirf 2 din mereliye nikal ke achhi tarah se kardo please

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