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Sgu:Gn mVu6n ent8rn8t comIan:fs succ8ss rat8 is lo]8rthan an 8l8ctronics irm

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6n ent8rn8t comIan:fs succ8ss rat8 is lo]8rthan that o an 8l8ctronics irm

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVu6n in4 j8t Irint8r is normall: l8ss 8YI8nsiv8

a $i6n in4 j8t Irint8r is normall: l8ss 8YI8nsiv8

than a las8r on8

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVuAist8ning is as imIortantM i not imIortantthanM ta4ing not8s ]h8n att8n9ing a l8ctur8

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Aist8ning is as imIortant asM i not imIortantthanM ta4ing not8s ]h8n att8n9ing a l8ctur8

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVuklat 9isIla: monitors hav8 as long a Iro9uctli8M i not long8r thanM normal on8s

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klat 9isIla: monitors hav8 as long a Iro9uctli8 asM i not long8r thanM normal on8s

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVu6 gra9uat8 stu98ntfs li48lihoo9 o s8curing8mIlo:m8nt ]h8n comIl8ting stu9i8s is

high8r than a univ8rsit: stu98nt

a $i

6 gra9uat8 stu98ntfs li48lihoo9 o s8curing8mIlo:m8nt ]h8n comIl8ting stu9i8s ishigh8r than that o a univ8rsit: stu98nt

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVuenjuri8s incurr89 rom Ila:ing ootball ar8usuall: mor8 s8v8r8

a $i

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Sgu:Gn mVu6 machin8fs caIacit: to Iro9uc8 Iarts isgr8at8r than a ]or48r

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6 machin8fs caIacit: to Iro9uc8 Iarts isgr8at8r than that o a ]or48r

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Sgu:Gn mVuchool tuition can b8 as 8YI8nsiv8M i notmor8 8YI8nsiv8 thanM living 8YI8ns8s

a $i

chool tuition can b8 as 8YI8nsiv8 asM i notmor8 8YI8nsiv8 thanM living 8YI8ns8s

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVu8nugoIal an9 Sar8n9ran 7PQQdb; consi98r89limitations machin8 caIaciti8sM Iro9uction

amounts an9 Iroc8ssing tim8s o Iarts

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Sgu:Gn mVuS ratios ar8 anal:89 98t8rmin8 th8oItimal s8ttings o th8 98sign Iaram8t8rs

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S ratios ar8 anal:89 to 98t8rmin8 th8oItimal s8ttings o th8 98sign Iaram8t8rs

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVu6 9octorat8 98gr88 is usuall: mor8 tim8consuming

a $i

6 9octorat8 98gr88 is usuall: mor8 tim8consuming than oth8r 98gr88s

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Sgu:Gn mVu6 98Iartm8nt 9ir8ctorfs authorit: is mor8Io]8rul than an assistant

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6 98Iartm8nt 9ir8ctorfs authorit: is mor8Io]8rul than that o an assistant

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Sgu:Gn mVu,roj8ct89 8YI8ns8s can b8 as highM i nothigh8r thanM actual on8s

a $i,roj8ct89 8YI8ns8s can b8 as high asM i nothigh8r thanM actual on8s

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t8chnical comIani8s than an: oth8r cit: in%ai]an

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Sgu:Gn mVu%hos8 obj8ctiv8s g8n8rall: conlict 8achoth8r

a $i%hos8 obj8ctiv8s g8n8rall: conlict ]ith 8achoth8r

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVuriting a rough 9rat can ta48 long8r

a $iriting a rough 9rat can ta48 long8r than]riting th8 inal IaI8r

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVu_ngin88ring ju9g8m8nt is us89 Irimaril: solving th8oItimiation o comIlicat89 multir8sIons8 Irobl8m

in %aguchifs 08tho9

a $i_ngin88ring ju9g8m8nt is us89 Irimaril: or solvingth8 oItimiation o comIlicat89 multir8sIons8Irobl8m in %aguchifs 08tho9

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Sgu:Gn mVu_YI8ctations can b8 as gr8atM i not gr8at8rthanM on8fs abilit:

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_YI8ctations can b8 as gr8at asM i notgr8at8r thanM on8fs abilit:

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Sgu:Gn mVu%h8 r8st o this IaI8r organi89 as ollo]s

a $i%h8 r8st o this IaI8r is organi89 asollo]s

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0 d1

Sgu:Gn mVuimultan8ousl: oItimiing 9i8r8ntobj8ctiv8s a r8lativ8l: 9iicult tas4

a $iimultan8ousl: oItimiing 9i8r8ntobj8ctiv8s is a r8lativ8l: 9iicult tas4

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Sgu:Gn mVu%his in9ing conirms that th8 IroIos89sch8m8s ar8 mor8 8ici8nt

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Sgu:Gn mVu%h8 normali89 valu8 can b8 as larg8M i notlarg8r thanM that o th8 Xualit: loss

a $i%h8 normali89 valu8 can b8 as larg8 asM inot larg8r thanM that o th8 Xualit: loss

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Sgu:Gn mVu6 r8s8arch8rfs salar: can b8 as highM i nothigh8r thanM that o a Iro8ssor

a $i6 r8s8arch8rfs salar: can b8 as high asM inot high8r thanM that o a Iro8ssor

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