WritingClass 3 Grade 9

Yexie School

Wendy is a _____ girl.• She thinks some of the school work is too

simple for her.

• She usually achieves A grades in all her subjects.

• She never fails an exam.

clever

Topic sentence( 主题句 )

Supporting sentences( 扩展句 / 支撑句 )

structure

a sentence to tell the reader what the paragraph is mainly about.

(让读者知道所写段落主要谈论什么 )

sentences to give more detailed （详细） information about the topic sentence( 说明或铺叙该段落的主题思想。 )

Find the topic sentence

• She is helpful.

• Other students often ask her to assist them.

She is helpful.

Choose the topic sentence

Her dad is the manager of the company.

Her mum is responsible for sales.

Her brother is the accountant.Every morning they discuss the business over

breakfast.

She has a family business.

She has a colourful school life.

a. Her dad is the manager of the company.

b. She always goes to school in her family car.

c. She has written several successful computer games.

d. Her mum is responsible for sales.

e. She usually achieves A grades in all her subjects.

f. Her brother is the accountant.

TS:TS: Wendy’s family Wendy’s family help her a lot on her help her a lot on her business .business .

1.1. 2.2.

3.3.

aa dd

ff

Find the Supporting sentences

a. On Fridays she has Computer Club meetings.

b. She seldom goes to bed before 11:30pm.

c. On Mondays and Thursdays she plays basketball.

d. She gets up at six every morning.

e. Once a week she has violin lessons.

TS:TS: After school she After school she usually attends a club.usually attends a club.

1.1. 2.2.

3.3.

aa cc

ee

Find the Supporting sentences

b. She seldom goes to bed before 11:30pm.

d. She gets up at six every morning.

Wendy is a hard-working girl.

Think and choose

1. Every afternoon, he leaves the classroom until very late and closes all the windows of the classroom.

2. He usually cleans the blackboard for his classmates when they are busy.

3. He never tells lies.

4. My classmate WangLei is a warm-hearted boy.

Topic sentence

Supporting sentences (examples and explanations)

不写和主题句无关的句子

Write the topic sentence

____________________________________.

Tom always helps his classmates with their studies. When his classmates have some problems with their homework, they will ask him. And he is always willing to help them.

Tom is a helpful /warm-hearted boyTS

Write the supporting sentences. TS:Damin is very strong.

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He is over 65 now but still works every day. He can control his raft in the river although he is an elderly man.

TS:JiangWenying is a hard-working student in our class. She always gets up early to read books. After class, she is still busy solving her maths problems when others are having a rest.

TS_______is a hard-working student in our class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. ____________________________________________________________________.

Write about 60 words on the topic "The Person I Admire Most"

Person (人称 ):

Tense（时态） :

Key points (要点） :

1. Who is the person you admire (佩服 )most? 2. Why do you admire him/her most? (give at least 2

reasons)

he / she

一般现在时

Why ？ Two reasons1. 请注意 supporting sentences 要和 topic sentence 有关联 ( 不写无关句子 ) 2. 第三人称后面的动词 +s,es

Writing Time

Conclusion:

Conclusion: 1.写主题句和它的扩展句

2.用 checklist帮助同伴互评

3.下一节课将学习如何对这篇文章进行遣词造句。

Homework Rewrite your composition

according to the checklist.

Practice makes perfect!

The Person I Admire Most

The person I admire most is our Chinese teacher, Mr Pan.

He is a very responsible teacher. He comes to school at 6:30 every morning to check students’ homework. Some students in our class fall behind others, he will encourage them to work hard.

He is also a lovely teacher. His Chinese class is very interesting. I always hear you laugh happily in his lesson.

He sets a good example for me. I will learn from him.

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