catherine pp
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Our PitchStacy, Catherine & Maya
OUR PITCHStacy, Catherine & Maya
OUR PITCH
OVERALL STORYLINEThe guy is caught in the moment of death of him and his friends, so he sees it over and over again. He has thirty seconds after the murder to find clues to help him investigate who and why killed him and how can he prevent it from happening.
OPENING SEQUENCE SCRIPT[Three man walking down a narrow path] [Long low shot]
[1 & 2 walking in the front, 3 walks slightly slower, looking at his phone][mid shot from the side]
1: Have you heard anything about Alex lately? [closeup of 1]
2: No. Why? [closeup of 2]
1: I heard he has got himself into trouble with someone in the pub last week, after that he has gone missing. [mid shot of 1&2]
2: What? No way! [mid shot of 1&2]
1: It’s true, ask (man 3 name) about it. [Closeup of 1]
[1 & 2 realised 3 has stopped turning to face him] [mid shot of 1&2]
1: Hey, what’s wrong? Been dumped by (someone’s name) again? [Laughs]
3: I don’t know, my phone keeps glitching… [close up of 3]
[1&2 realised the man behind 3’s back] [closeup of 1] [pov of 1]
[closeup of 3 face] [sound of gun firing: Bang] [3 falls facedown high establishing shot]
[blackout]
[3 comes into the scene looks at his clock] [long low shot]
3: Oh, the time is running out! [close up of 3 looking at his watch] [A series of closeups showing 3 looking around for clues] [a close up of the glitching phone he finds] [Closeup of the clock showing that there is no more time][cut][blockout]
POTENTIAL CASTMain Character: Gareth/Guy
Friend 1: Amory
Friend 2:
Killer: Mike
POTENTIAL LOCATIONSThe road to the Art department
POTENTIAL COSTUMESCostume wise, for our main characters’ we are going to have casual outfits in dark earthly colours to meet with their class (middle) and men stereotype. We also need to consider about the weather and seasoning clothes, to fit what’s in the background (leafs falling), so we need them to be wearing coats or some short of warm layers. Boots and sneakers would be ideal for their shoes, for example jeans and black trousers, sweaters and scarfs etc.
For the killer we want him to wear a black jacket with hood and collar to create a sense of mystery, as well as fitting in the image of “bad guy” with his hood on, we need to make audience think that he is trying to hide his face from the CCTV, avoiding to be seen by other people.
Feedback from Mike When we pitched our idea to Mike he suggested that we probably should not reveal to much in our opening sequence, so we eliminated the part, where we showed a part of the story rewinded. Instead we introduced the part where a guy searches for evidence to investigate his death. This helped to make our sequence less confusing, but still engaging.
Contact sheet Maya: [email protected], 7565339374
Catherine: [email protected], 7702046093
Stacey: [email protected], 7460730981