Module 2 City Life 写作指导

新广州版小学英语六年级上册

广州市天河区银河小学 罗喆

写作要求：请用英语介绍一个你熟悉的城市，写写这个城市的优缺点，要求不少于 5 句话，约 40个单词。

Dear Lily,My holiday in the city is very interesting. It is very different to our home on the farm. In the city, there are so many cars. The traffic is very heavy and the streets are crowded and dirty. Sometimes I am afraid to go outside. And it is very noisy too. At night, I can’t go to sleep because there are too many cars. But there are many nice things here too. There are many supermarkets here and they sell lots of different things. There are also many beautiful modern buildings. There is much more to do in the city than in the countryside. At home we have only one shop and one cinema, but in this city there are many theatres and parks. I can play all day. I like the city very much but I really miss you and the farm. I can’t wait to get back home and see all my friends.Love,Li Wei

1. Beginning:Start with you and your city.

2. Body 1:Bad things in the city.

3. Body 2:Good thingsin the city.

4. End:Draw a conclusion.

Unit 4 I like the city very much

1. Beginning:Start with you and your city.

2. Body 1:Bad things in the city.

3. Body 2:Good thingsin the city.

4. End: Draw a conclusion.

1. 开头总起引出你要描述的城市。如： I live in Guangzhou. My favourite city is Guanghzou. 2. 主干的第一部分介绍城市的缺点。如： The streets in Guangzhou are very crowded. The

traffic is heavy and slow. Sometimes I can’t go to sleep because there are too many cars.

3. 主干的第二部分介绍城市的优点。如： There are many supermarkets in the city. There

are also many tall and modern buildings. The parks are quiet and beautiful. There are many things to do in Guangzhou. I can play all day.

4. 最后总结你对这个城市的感受。如： I like the city very much. I love living in this city. I don’t like this city. I don’t enjoy the city life.

I live in Guangzhou. The streets in Guangzhou are very crowded. The traffic is heavy and slow. Sometimes I can’t go to sleep because there are too many cars.

There are many supermarkets in the city. There are also many tall and modern buildings. The parks are quiet and beautiful. There are many things to do in Guangzhou. I can play all day.

I like the city very much. I love living in the city.

But there are many nice things here too.

I live in Guangzhou. There are many supermarkets in the city. There are also many tall and modern buildings. The parks are quiet and beautiful. There are many things to do in Guangzhou. I can play all day.But there are some bad things here.The streets in Guangzhou are very crowded. The traffic is heavy and slow. Sometimes I can’t go to sleep because there are too many cars.

But I still like the city very much. I love living in the city.

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Let’s try： 根据写作步骤及范文，用英文描述一个你熟悉的城市吧。

范文一： I live in Guangzhou. The streets in Guangzhou are very crowded. The traffic is heavy and slow. Sometimes I can’t go to sleep because there are too many cars. But there are many nice things here too. There are many supermarkets in the city. There are also many tall and modern buildings. The parks are quiet and beautiful. There are many things to do in Guangzhou. I can play all day. I like the city very much. I love living in the city.

范文二： I live in Guangzhou. There are many supermarkets in the city. There are also many tall and modern buildings. The parks are quiet and beautiful. There are many things to do in Guangzhou. I can play all day. But there are some bad things here. The streets in Guangzhou are very crowded. The traffic is heavy and slow. Sometimes I can’t go to sleep because there are too many cars. But I still like the city very much. I love living in the city.

Thank you for watching!