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Page 1: Proof Reading ( 2014 全国课标 I ) …..The river was so polluted that it________ (actual) caught fire and burned. …….Finally, that hard work paid off and now

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Page 2: Proof Reading ( 2014 全国课标 I ) …..The river was so polluted that it________ (actual) caught fire and burned. …….Finally, that hard work paid off and now

• ( 2014全国课标 I )… ..The river was so polluted that it________ (actual) caught fire and burned. …….Finally, that hard work paid off and now the water in the river is_______(clean) than ever.

• ( 2014全国课标 II )… ..some of them looked very anxiousand____________(disappoint)

• ………..,and the crowded of strangers

_________(sudden) became friendly to one another.

actually

cleaner

disappointed

suddenly

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1. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself.

2.I’m sure you will find one you like it. .

3. I like playing piano.

the

错词

talking

改错格式改错格式

多词

缺词

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Dear diary,

Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from o

ur farmland. Do you want to know why we move last week? Da

d lost his job, and as Mum explained, He was lucky to find oth

er one.His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmat

e, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To mad

e matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sis

ter, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring,

but I know I’ll never fall sleep.

Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only so

uvenir from my past life and my only friend. Yours

Rosemary

moved

another

classmates and

worse

∧the/my

tired asleep

are

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2010-20132010-2013 改错考点分改错考点分配配

年份 名词冠词

形容词副词

代词 主谓一致

介词 连词 动词词组

时态 非谓语动词

2010 1 2 1 0 2 1 0 1 2

2011 1 4 1 0 2 0 0 1 1

2012 2 3 1 0 1 1 0 1 1

2013 2 3 1 1 0 1 0 1 1

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改错的分类

一 . 名词、冠词

二 . 动词(谓语动词和非谓语动词)三 . 连词

四 . 代词

五 . 引导词

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I hope all my student can be admitted into college.

Nowadays, almost every family has computer, and …

Tianma school will give you all the knowledges you need.

The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella.

students

∧a

一. 名词和冠词 1. 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。2. 冠词 a, an 和 the 的用法错误.

knowledge

an

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now I was a member of our school football team.

Now my math and chinese teacher are in my home.

Of course, when my mother was asked, “Have you…”

am

is

___

__

二. 动词1. 谓语动词主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如:

Page 9: Proof Reading ( 2014 全国课标 I ) …..The river was so polluted that it________ (actual) caught fire and burned. …….Finally, that hard work paid off and now

1.It was the first time I have been to Hongko

ng.

2. Not only the students but also the teach

er like Lee Minho.

had

likes3. Tianmaschool considered as one

of the most beautiful schools.∧is

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 1.Play basketball makes us grow up tall and strong

2.My parents love me… and will do all they can make sure…

3.Giving more time, we could do it much better.

to

playing

Given

2 . 非谓语动词 

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1.不定式2.动名词作主语、宾语3.and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致4.现在分词和过去分词的区别等

非谓语动词细辨别 

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1. We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories..

• 2.I got up early catch the early bus.

• 3.It is difficult to make yourself understand in English.

understood

visited

∧to

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注:名词动词的修饰词

I am sure we'll have a wonderfully time together.

We can hear birds singing happy all around.

wonderful

happily

1修饰名词、系动词要用形容词;2修饰动词、形容词、整个句子用副词;3比较级和最高级的使用。 4. 形容词的 ed 形式与 ing 形式

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• 1.I never spent a more worried day.

• 2.She said that her son worked happy there

every day.

• 3.This is a most beautiful park. I have never

seen a best one before.

• 4.They look for an immediately pleasure from a

dangenous activity

worrying

happily

better

immediate

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连词 but , and , or, so 和 although 等的用法错误.

1. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able to come tonight .but

三 . 连词

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1.She's smiling at me but nodding at me.

2. I planed to give it back to you before four in the afternoon , and I was hold up on my way

back.

3. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.

but

and

or

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四.代词1. 人称代词的误用2. 人称代词格的误用3. 反身代词的误用

myself

their

__1. I just smiled to me and thought, "What can I do. We are guests after all."

2. Some students may also save up for our college or future use.

3. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. us

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I cannot make sense of that he said at the meeting.   I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.

At last, we achieved our goals and he did that he said The question is if the film is worth seeing.  

what

which___

五 . 从句引导词复合句中从句的关系词或引导词运用是否得当

___

___

what__

whether

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• This morning I found red wallet on the campus.

Girls usual like red, so I believed the wallet was

belonged to a girl student. I opened it, try to find out

whose it was. Therefore, I found nothing but 300

yuan in it. I was wondering what to do with it while

suddenly my classmates Chen Yang passed by. She

suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I

did so. I wrote down my telephone number and ask

the owner to call me after she saw it. Later, a girl

came to claim it on 3 o’clock this afternoon.

∧a

usually

trying

However

when

I

classmate

asked

at

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