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Analyzing headlines from 5 newsBYANGKHANA NAKKOED STUDENT NO. 55101010200

About 100 people injured in Hong Kong ferry collisionREUTERS

1:

'Everyone was bleeding': at least 100 injured as high-speed Macau ferry slams into unknown object near Lantau Island

SOUTH CHINA MORNING POST

Meaning:

About 100 people injured in Hong Kong ferry collision

ผโดยสารกวา 100 ราย ไดรบบาดเจบจากเหตการณเรอเฟอรรชนในเกาะฮองกง

Meaning:

'Everyone was bleeding': at least 100 injured as high-speed Macau ferry slams into unknown object near Lantau Island

ผโดยสารนองเลอด: ไมตำากวา 100 ราย ไดรบบาดเจบขณะเรอเฟอรรเรวของมาเกาพงชนวตถปรศนาใกลเกาะลนเตา

Structure of Headlines ABOUT 100 PEOPLE INJURED IN HONG KONG FERRY COLLISION

REUTERS

show number: grab attention and easy to image how much harmshort and laconic

'EVERYONE WAS BLEEDING': AT LEAST 100 INJURED AS HIGH-SPEED MACAU FERRY SLAMS INTO UNKNOWN OBJECT NEAR LANTAU ISLAND

SOUTH CHINA MORNING POST

using dramatic word: too exaggerated show number: grab attention and easy to image how much harmtoo specific: too much detailsalready summary: no need to read contenttoo long

It’s Getting Harder And Harder For Twitter To Find New UsersBUZZ FEED

2:

Twitter's Earnings Disappoints On User Growth, Leading To Fall In Stock PriceFORBES

Meaning: It’s Getting Harder And Harder For Twitter To Find New Users

มนยากขนและยากขนทกวนททวตเตอรจะหาผใชรายใหม

Meaning: Twitter's Earnings Disappoints On User Growth, Leading To Fall In Stock Price

รายไดของทวตเตอรทำาใหตองผดหวงกบยอดการเตบโต ของผใช หวนราคาหนตก

Structure of Headlines IT’S GETTING HARDER AND HARDER FOR TWITTER TO FIND NEW USERS

BUZZ FEED

not specific: make readers curious to know what has happenedweak and wordy: repeat the same word (Getting Harder And Harder)intimately with readers: easy to understand

TWITTER'S EARNINGS DISAPPOINTS ON USER GROWTH, LEADING TO FALL IN STOCK PRICE

FORBES

get specific: readers know what the topic is aboutshort and laconicstrong word: serious, hard news

Want To Drive Innovation? Talk To Your CustomersFORBES

3:

Your Secret Resource to Get a Better Product: Customer ServiceENTREPRENEUR

Meaning: Want To Drive Innovation? Talk To Your Customers

อยากจะขบเคลอนนวตกรรมหรอ? ไปคยกบลกคาคณส

Meaning: Your Secret Resource to Get a Better Product: Customer Service

ขมสมบตลบทจะทำาใหคณมสนคาทดกวาเดม: การบรการลกคา

Structure of Headlines WANT TO DRIVE INNOVATION? TALK TO YOUR CUSTOMERS

FORBES

hide the topic: hint by a question, make readers curious to know howpersonal: talk directly to readersshort and attractive

YOUR SECRET RESOURCE TO GET A BETTER PRODUCT: CUSTOMER SERVICE

ENTREPRENEUR

reveal the main ideashort and cover the topicpersonal: talk directly to readerspowerful word

The Woman Who Turned Her High School Science Project Into A Global Solar NonprofitFORBES

4:

This woman dropped out of Princeton at 19 to start a global nonprofit and it completely changed her outlook on educationBUSINESS INSIDER

Meaning: The Woman Who Turned Her High School Science Project Into A Global Solar Nonprofit

ผหญงทเปลยนโปรเจควชาวทยาศาสตรสมยมธยมใหกลายเปนโซลารเพอโลกโดยไมแสวงผลกำาไร

Meaning: This woman dropped out of Princeton at 19 to start a global nonprofit and it completely changed her outlook on education

ผหญงคนนลาออกจากมหาวทยาลยพรนซตน ตอนอาย 19 เพอ เรมทำาเพอโลกโดยไมหวงผลตอบแทน และมนไดเปลยนทศนคต

ตอการศกษาของเธอไปอยางสนเชง

Structure of Headlines THE WOMAN WHO TURNED HER HIGH SCHOOL SCIENCE PROJECT INTO A GLOBAL SOLAR NONPROFIT

FORBES

short and relevantwrite for outsider: write an identity information instead of her namesurprising fact

THIS WOMAN DROPPED OUT OF PRINCETON AT 19 TO START A GLOBAL NONPROFIT AND IT COMPLETELY CHANGED HER OUTLOOK ON EDUCATIONBUSINESS INSIDER

too long and outlying: too much details that readers don’t want to know write for outsider: write an identity information instead of her name surprising fact

Cara Delevingne Shows Off Her ‘Suicide Squad’ Look on the Cover of Empire MagazineTHE FASHIONS POT

5:

Cara Delevingne looks TERRIFYING in raunchy Suicide Squad costume and describes Enchantress as 'feral'MIRROR

Meaning: Cara Delevingne Shows Off Her ‘Suicide Squad’ Look on the Cover of Empire Magazine

คารา เดลาวน เผยลคจากภาพยนตรเรอง ‘Suicide Squad’ บนปกนตยสารEmpire Magazine

Meaning: Cara Delevingne looks TERRIFYING in raunchy Suicide Squad costume and describes Enchantress as 'feral‘

คารา เดลาวน ในชดเซกซสดสะพรงจากภาพยนตรเรองSuicide Squad ‘ ’ พรอมพดถงการรบบท แมมดสาว ในชอเอนแชนเทรส

Structure of Headlines CARA DELEVINGNE SHOWS OFF HER ‘SUICIDE SQUAD’ LOOK ON THE COVER OF EMPIRE MAGAZINE

THE FASHIONS POT

begin with a famous person: grab attentionshort and laconicreaders only looking for photos

CARA DELEVINGNE LOOKS TERRIFYING IN RAUNCHY SUICIDE SQUAD COSTUME AND DESCRIBES ENCHANTRESS AS 'FERAL‘

MIRROR

begin with a famous person: grab attentionadjective: more interestingtell what’s next: readers continue reading on contentreaders looking for both photos and content

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