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Trevor Lane, PhD Julian Tang, PhD
Author Success Workshop:
Writing a Research Paper with Impact
Utsunomiya University
19 February 2016
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Be an effective communicator
Your goal is not only to be published, but also to be widely read and cited
Preparing well for academic publishing
Selecting the best journal
Developing your writing skills
Logically communicating your ideas in your manuscript
Promoting your research
Preparing well for academic publishing
Section 1
Skills needed on the path to publication success
Preparation
Journal Selection
Writing
Submission
Peer Review
Publication Success
• Training in reading papers, ethics, writing, presenting
• Expert Scientific Review
• Expert Scientific Review
• Journal Selection & submission strategy
• Training in ethics, writing, presenting
• Revising • Editing • Reformatting
• Training in ethics, writing
• Editing • Abstract
Development • Cover Letter
Development • Reviewer
Recommendation
• Training in navigating peer review
• Review Editing • Point-by-point
checking • Response
Letter Development
• Reformatting
• Press release, news writing
• Media & presentation training
• Training for early career researchers
• Training in writing grant proposals
• Grant proposal editing
Patenting Engagement
Coverage and Staffing Plan Prepare well
Why English?
International language of academia & research (& business, policy, diplomacy…)
International reputation
Career advancement
Overseas collaborations
Why publish in English?
Maximum exposure/use
Work abroad; conferences
Coverage and Staffing Plan Prepare well Writing a manuscript
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My manuscript is a written record of my findings
My findings speak for themselves, even if the manuscript is written poorly
Good English means only grammar and spelling
Using complex words makes my writing more impressive
Your manuscript is to communicate your findings to your research & academic communities
You need a well-written manuscript to effectively communicate your findings
Keep things simple – Using complex words makes your writing more difficult to understand
Good English means clear, concise arguments; logical organization; & high readability
Coverage and Staffing Plan Prepare well
Increase impact
High quality research
Logical, engaging, useful message
Original and novel research
Well-designed, well-reported,
transparent study News value, importance, timeliness
What editors want
High scientific & technical quality, appropriate & clear methods,
sound research & publication ethics
High readability & interest; clear, real-
world relevance
Impact factor (past 2 years) = No. of citations / No. of articles
Coverage and Staffing Plan Prepare well
Research Article (Original Article)
Short Communication (Research Note)
Case Study Technical Note Review Article Letter to the Editor
Brief report about a specific finding
Most common; full-length paper
Brief report about a specific situation
Brief report about a new methodology
Summary of recent advances in a field
Brief discussion about a published article; may contain research findings (= Research Letter)
Types of articles
Select your journal early!
Coverage and Staffing Plan Prepare well
Logically organize your ideas; adhere
to journal guidelines
Communicate well in English
Factors to consider when writing a manuscript
Importance of planning
Draft outline & abstract/title; Draft & revise
manuscript
Edit manuscript & finalize
abstract/title
Coverage and Staffing Plan Prepare well
Submissions
Plagiarism
Data manipulation
Authorship
Submit to only one journal at a time; do not republish the same paper; no salami
Paraphrase and cite all sources
Do not fabricate or falsify data; do not manipulate parts of images
Study design or data acquisition/analysis; Writing/revising; Approval; Accountable
Publication ethics
Funding & COIs Disclose any funding and financial/personal
relationships
Safety Humans: Approval, signed consent, privacy;
animal and environmental safety
Committee on Publication Ethics, COPE
Coverage and Staffing Plan Prepare well
Choose your journal early!
Author guidelines • Manuscript structure • Word limits, References • Procedures, Copyright
Aims and scope • Topics • Readership • Be sure to emphasize
• Learn writing style • Check relevant references • Check originality, importance & usefulness!
Selecting the best journal
Section 2
Journal selection Evaluating impact
How new/important are your findings? How strong is the evidence?
Incremental or large advance? Low or high impact journal
Novelty
Assess your findings honestly & objectively
New type of high-efficiency solar cell • Medium to high impact factor journal Improve the efficiency of an existing solar cell • Low to medium impact factor journal
Journal selection Evaluating impact
How broadly relevant are your findings? International or regional journal
General or specialized journal
Relevance/Application
Assess your findings honestly & objectively
Aims & scope, Readership
Journal selection Factors to consider when choosing a journal
Aims & scope, Readership
Publication speed/frequency
Online/Print, Open access
Indexing, Rank, Impact factor
Acceptance rate/criteria
Article type / evidence level
“Luxury” / Traditional / Megajournal
Online first, Supplemental materials, Cost, Copyright
Cascading review, Fast track
Journal selection Publication models
Subscription-based
• Mostly free for the author • Reader has to pay
Open access • Free for the reader • Author usually has to pay
Hybrid • Subscription-based journal • Has open access options
Journal selection Open access models
Green
• Can self-archive accepted version in personal, university, or repository website
• May allow final version to be archived
• May have embargo period before self-archiving is allowed
Gold • Free for public on publication • Author might keep © but may
pay (e.g., US$1000–3000)
Journal selection Open access myths
Open access (OA) is expensive and low quality
• Not all OA journals charge a fee
• Many research grants and universities pay for OA fees
• Journals may offer waiver for authors who cannot afford it
• OA journals are peer reviewed
• Impact factors may be lower partly because they are newer
Journal selection Predatory journals
Some Open Access journals are not good
Easy way to get money from authors
• Promise quick and easy publication • Often ask for a “submission/handling” fee • May copy name of real journal; false IF • May not exist, or may be of low quality • Beware of spam e-mails!
If you are ever unsure, please check Beall’s List of Predatory Publishers
http://scholarlyoa.com/2016/01/05/bealls-list-of-predatory-publishers-2016/
Journal selection
Reputable publisher Springer, Elsevier, Wiley, PLOS, etc.
Editorial board International and familiar
Indexed Indexed by common databases
Authors Do you recognize the authors?
Fees Paid only after acceptance
Trustworthy journals
Journal selection
THINK Trusted and appropriate?
SUBMIT Only if OK
thinkchecksubmit.org
CHECK Do you know the journal?
Trustworthy journals
Journal selection Journal Selector www.edanzediting.co.jp/journal_selector
Insert your proposed abstract or keywords
Journal selection
Matching journals
Journal Selector www.edanzediting.co.jp/journal_selector
Filter/sort by: • Field of study • Impact factor • Open access • Publishing
frequency
Journal’s aims & scope, IF,
and publication frequency
Journal selection Journal Selector www.edanzediting.co.jp/journal_selector
• Author guidelines • Journal website
Are they currently publishing similar articles?
Have you cited relevant ones?
Similar published articles
Developing your writing skills
Section 3
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
Start with your illustrations
Where to start?
Your findings form the basis of your manuscript
First step: logically organize your display items
Logic, then language
Figure 1
Figure 2
Table 1
Figure 3
Logical flow (Chronology, Most to least
important, General to
specific, Whole+parts)
Is anything missing?
? Additional analyses?
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing Prepare an outline
I. Introduction A. General background B. Related studies C. Problems in the field D. Aims
II. Methods A. Subjects/Samples/Materials B. General methods C. Specific methods D. Statistical analyses
III. Results A. Key points about Figure 1 B. Key points about Table 1 C. Key points about Figure 2 D. Key points about Figure 3 E. Key points about Figure 4
IV. Discussion A. Major conclusion B. Key findings that support conclusion C. Relevance to published studies D. Limitations E. Unexpected results F. Implications G. Future directions
Write down key ideas in bullet points, as IMRaD (Introduction, Methods, Results, and Discussion)
No need for sentences or correct
English yet Then, draft the title/abstract
List information from your reading in the appropriate section: Paraphrase with citations!
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing Get feedback
Write your manuscript section-by-section – Less stressful – Get feedback after each section; set deadlines – Easier for your colleagues to review
Revise for content, overall logic, and journal style (see guidelines/past papers)
Edit for consistency, conciseness, clarity & accuracy
Get feedback from pre-submission peer review
Get language assistance
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing Improving readability
Keep it simple!
Use short sentences 15–20 words; one idea per sentence
Prefer simpler/shorter words
Use active voice Simpler, more direct, and easier to read
Most writing style guides and journals prefer it… “Nature journals prefer authors to write in the active voice”
(http://www.nature.com/authors/author_resources/how_write.html)
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing Active voice
Sentences written in the active voice are:
simple direct clear easy to read
The mechanisms regulating substrate rigidity were investigated by us.
Passive
We investigated the mechanisms regulating substrate rigidity.
Active
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
Nature’s guide to authors:
Nature is an international journal covering all the sciences. Contributions should therefore be written clearly and simply so that they are accessible to readers in other disciplines and to readers for whom English is not their first language.
www.nature.com/nature/authors/gta/index.html#a4
“I should use complex words and sentences to make my writing more impressive.”
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
How can this sentence be improved?
• Too long (35 words)
• Two ideas in the same sentence
– First idea is split
Economists considered Apple Inc., a company that was founded by Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak and incorporated in 1977 in Cupertino, California, to be one of the leaders in the development of modern electronic appliances.
Keep it short and simple
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
How can this sentence be improved?
Economists considered Apple Inc., a company that was founded by Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak and incorporated in 1977 in Cupertino, California, to be one of the leaders in the development of modern electronic appliances.
Keep it short and simple
• Too long (35 words)
• Two ideas in the same sentence
– First idea is split
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
Economists considered Apple Inc. to be one of the leaders in the development of modern electronic appliances. This company was founded by Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak and incorporated in 1977 in Cupertino, California.
Keep it short and simple
Two 17-word sentences
One idea per sentence
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
1. You deserve the funding, but the study design is not perfect.
Which sentence suggests that you
will get funding?
2. The study design is not perfect, but you deserve the funding.
Native English style
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
The study design is not perfect, but you deserve the
funding. The grant will be awarded in two stages.
Stress position
Topic position
The topic position introduces the idea of the current sentence
Readers focus at the end of the sentence to determine what is important. This stress position also introduces
the topic of the next sentence (useful for explanations and processes).
Sentence and paragraph structure
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
idea idea idea idea
Topic link
sentence
Sentence and paragraph structure
The government of Tanzania has been striving to introduce Information and Communication Technology (ICT) in education. In teacher education, technology was introduced through the ICT-Connect-TED project. The program aimed at improving the quality of teachers through the use of ICT. ICT-Connect-TED provided computers and a networking infrastructure to all 34 teacher training colleges in Tanzania.
Source: Kafyulilo et al. Educ Inf Technol. 5 May 2015; DOI 10.1007/s10639-015-9398-0
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
One method of producing carbon fibre precursors, with the potential of commercial applicability, is electrospinning. It has previously been demonstrated that electrospinning can successfully produce precursor fibres that can be converted into high quality carbon fibres with controlled fibre diameters and morphologies. The majority of electrospun carbon fibre precursors reported in the literature are PAN-based. The high cost of PAN, depleting petroleum resources and the toxicity of its solvent, dimethylformamide, has motivated research to look into alternative electrospinnable materials to produce cheaper and more environmentally friendly carbon fibres. Because petroleum-based carbon resources exhibit negative environmental impacts and are of limited availability further motivates research towards green carbon fibres.
Recently, a wide range of renewable resource-based materials have been investigated for the fabrication of carbon materials. Among them, lignin has been looked at as a very promising candidate…
Schreiber et al. J Mater Sci. 2014; 49: 7949–7958.
Topic sentence
Stress sentence Topic sentence
Supporting sentences
Sentence and paragraph structure
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing Avoid mistakes 1
Prefer Enough Clear Determine Begin Try Very Size Keep Enough End Use
Avoid complex words… Adequate Apparent Ascertain Commence Endeavor Exceedingly Magnitude* Retain Sufficient Terminate* Utilization *OK in certain fields (magnitude of earthquakes, to terminate gene expression)
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
“A number of studies have shown that the charged group...”
“...as described in our previous study.”
“...at a flow rate of 1.0 mL/min.”
“As a matter of fact, such a low-temperature reaction…”
“That is another reason why, we believe…”
“It is well known that most of the intense diffraction peaks...” “It is well known that Most of the intense diffraction peaks...”
“As a matter of fact, such a This low-temperature reaction…”
“A number of studies have shown that The charged group...”
“That is thus another reason why Therefore, we believe…”
“...as described previously in our previous study.”
“...at a flow rate of 1.0 mL/min.”
Avoid mistakes 2
Avoid complexity: delete extra words!
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
Avoid At a concentration of 2 g/L At a temperature of 37C In order to In the first place Four in number Green color Subsequent to Prior to Future plans; past history
Prefer At 2 g/L At 37C To First Four Green After Before Plans; history
Avoid mistakes 2
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
Estimate Estimation
Decide Decision
Assess Assessment
We made a/an… We conducted a/an… Extra verb
We decided… Clear, short, and direct
Avoid mistakes 3
Don’t hide verbs inside nouns!
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
Readers expect…
verbs to closely follow their subjects heavy ends (not starts) of clauses
Subject
The device leakage current of the transistors fabricated on SiO2 with different self-assembled monolayers decreased by two orders of magnitude after annealing.
The transistors were fabricated on SiO2 with different self-assembled monolayers. The device leakage current decreased by two orders of magnitude after annealing.
Verb
Avoid mistakes 4
Coverage and Staffing Plan Effective writing
Compared with is for saying how things are different
The accuracy of the new program was reduced
compared to the previous program.
The accuracy of the new program was reduced compared with that of the previous program.
The accuracy of the new program was lower than that of the previous program.
Avoid mistakes 5
Activity 1
Please see Activity 1 in your workbook
Logically communicating your ideas in your manuscript
Section 4
Manuscript structure Manuscript sections
How does your study contribute to your field?
What did you find?
What did you do?
Why did you do the study?
Title/Abstract
Introduction
Methods
Results
Discussion
Manuscript structure
Title/Abstract
Introduction
Methods
Results
Discussion
Title/Abstract
Methods
Results
Discussion
Introduction
Abstract /Title
write
The ‘write’ order
Manuscript structure
Aim
Introduction
Current state of the field
Background information
Specific aim/approach/contents
Problem in the field
Previous studies
Current study
General
Specific Importance/hypothesis
Worldwide relevance? Broad/specialized?
Recent, International Not too many self-cites
Check journal if Results can be previewed
Why is your study needed?
Manuscript structure Introduction
Current state of the field
Background information
Specific aim/approach/contents
Problem in the field
Importance/hypothesis
Scaffold-based tissue engineering involves the combination of
cells, bioactive factors and structural scaffolding materials
to promote repair and regeneration of
tissues.1-3
Manuscript structure Introduction
Current state of the field
Background information
Specific aim/approach/contents
Problem in the field
Importance/hypothesis
Researchers have recently developed
many scaffold materials for specific
injury sites. These scaffolds effectively
support cell attachment and
growth….
Manuscript structure Introduction
Current state of the field
Background information
Specific aim/approach/contents
Problem in the field
Importance/hypothesis
…Integrating electrospun scaffolds
with cells remains challenging. It is often difficult for
cells that are cultured on electrospun fibers
to penetrate into pores.
Manuscript structure Introduction
Current state of the field
Background information
Specific aim/approach/contents
Problem in the field
Importance/hypothesis
…Optimizing both porous and
mechanical features of scaffolds for tissue
engineering would be a crucial step in
simulating the extracellular matrix.
Manuscript structure Introduction
Current state of the field
Background information
Specific aim/approach/contents
Problem in the field
Importance/hypothesis
…This study aimed to design and fabricate
poly(glycolic acid) scaffolds using
electrospinning to consistently allow cellular infiltration into the scaffolds.
Manuscript structure Introduction
Current state of the field
Background information
Specific aim/approach/contents
Problem in the field
Importance/hypothesis
…We report the results of five experiments
reflecting different approaches of
scaffold production and the effects on cell infiltration and
tissue development.
Manuscript structure Problem/knowledge gap
However, …an alternative approach… …a challenge …a need for clarification… …a problem/weakness with… …has not been dealt with… …remains unstudied …requires clarification …is not sufficiently (+ adjective) …is ineffective/inaccurate/inadequate/inconclusive/incorrect ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Few studies have… There is an urgent need to… There is growing concern that… Little evidence is available on… It is necessary to… Little work has been done on…
Key phrases
Manuscript structure
For lithium manganese spinel electrodes, obtaining substituted spinels of a general formula Li[LiqMn2-q]O4 and decreasing the size of particles by pyrolysis lead to better cycling ability….However, particles exhibit fast aggregation upon thermal treatment with citric acid pyrolysis in air.
Problem in the field
Your aims must directly address the problem
Study sample
Variables Outcome
Lithium manganese spinel electrodes
Excess lithium ions Particle size
Pyrolysis conditions
Improved physical and electrochemical
properties Modified from: Potapenko et al. Mater Renew Sustain Energy. 2015; 4: 40.
Writing the Introduction
Manuscript structure
Your aims must directly address the problem
We describe the properties of Li[Li0.033Mn1.967]O4 after pyrolysis in an inert atmosphere. Its particle size is smaller, the degree of aggregation is lower, and high-rate properties are better that for its analogue pyrolyzed in air.
Study aims
Modified from: Potapenko et al. Mater Renew Sustain Energy. 2015; 4: 40.
Problem in the field
For lithium manganese spinel electrodes, obtaining substituted spinels of a general formula Li[LiqMn2-q]O4 and decreasing the size of particles by pyrolysis lead to better cycling ability….However, particles exhibit fast aggregation upon thermal treatment with citric acid pyrolysis in air.
Writing the Introduction
Manuscript structure Methods
What was done
• Variables measured • Processes, treatments, measurements • General to specific
• Quantification; models/equations • Statistical tests (& P level) • Consult a statistician
Who/what was studied
• Tests, controls • Number of samples/sets of tests • Materials/equipment (+ maker)
Data analysis
What did you do?
Manuscript structure
Established techniques
• Cite previously published studies • Briefly state modifications • Use flow chart/table if needed
• Explain purposes; justify choices • Give enough detail for reproducibility • Use Supplementary Information
Organization • Arrange in (titled) subsections • Keep parallel to the display items • Use topic sentences to start sections
New techniques
Caution notices for dangerous substances/processes …No incidents occurred; researchers have to be qualified and trained, and use
suitable protocols, precautions, and facilities
Methods
Manuscript structure
“We used NMR spectroscopy to determine the structure of the polymers.”
We name of
technique investigate
name of property.
study
measure
confirm
determine
used to
Method------------------------------Purpose
Method – Purpose
Methods
Manuscript structure
“To determine the structure of the polymers, we used NMR spectroscopy.”
we name of
technique.
used
Purpose-----------------------------Method
Purpose – Method
Methods
investigate
name of property,
study
measure
confirm
determine
To
Manuscript structure Results
• Synthesis, characteristics • Group, subgroups • Algorithm, trial, improvement
• Each subsection relates to one figure and method
• What you found, not what it means
• Use Supplementary Information
• Data accessibility
Logical presentation
Subsections
Factual description
What did you find?
Manuscript structure
Treatment A reduced soil lead levels by 32.7% and increased soil pH by 12.3%. Treatment B reduced soil lead levels by 22.3% and increased soil pH by 15.6%. Treatment C reduced soil lead levels by 38.1% and increased soil pH by 6.9%.
Describe relationships among your results
Manuscript structure
Treatment C reduced soil lead levels (38.1%) more effectively than treatments A (32.7%) and B (22.3%). However, treatment B increased soil pH levels (15.6%) more effectively than treatments A (12.3%) and C (6.9%).
Describe relationships among your results
Manuscript structure Discussion
Summary of results
Relevance
Conclusion
Similarities/differences Unexpected/negative results Limitations (validity, reliability)
Implications
Previous studies
Current study
Future studies
Specific
General
How do you advance your field?
This study demonstrates
for the first time that…
Manuscript structure Combined Results–Discussion
Results Interpretation
Figure 1
Results Interpretation
Figure 2
Results Interpretation
Figure 3
Results Interpretation
Figure 4
Initial observation
Logical presentation
Characterization
Application
Manuscript structure Combined Methods– Results–Discussion
Methods & Results Interpretation
Figure 1
Methods & Results Interpretation
Figure 2
Methods & Results Interpretation
Figure 3
Methods & Results Interpretation
Figure 4
Initial observation
Logical presentation
Characterization
Application
Manuscript structure Contrasting ideas
Main vs. subordinate clause
Although the study design is not perfect, you deserve funding.
Subordinate Main
Linking word
• Although • Even though • While • Whereas
Subordinate clauses say 2 things:
• Idea may not be important • There is a contrasting idea coming
Manuscript structure Discussing limitations
Although this study was limited by its small sample size, our results demonstrate that people using customizable news aggregation pages give high user experience scores.
Although our results demonstrate that page customization is useful, the study was limited by its small sample size.
Bad news = Subordinate clause at the start
Bad news = Main clause in stress position
Bad news = Subordinate clause at start Good news = LONG main clause in stress position
Manuscript structure
0
10
20
30
40
50
1 2 3 4 5
Check your opinions
Over 5 days of reverse bias
reliability testing the current of
the devices increased from 32 ±
10 μA to 43 ± 17 μA (Figure 2).
This rise in current may be
explained by…
Do you agree with this interpretation?
0
10
20
30
40
50
60
70
1 2 3 4 5Time (days)
Cu
rren
t (μ
A)
Is this real?
Manuscript structure
What do you want people to remember?
Writing the end of your Discussion
May be a separate section
May be a “Future work” section
In this paper we described an empirical study to characterize the rejection of inappropriate patches…in Mozilla Firefox. We have looked at three sources for studying patch rejections: code review, backouts—further divided into early and late backouts—and issue reopening….We believe that this study contributes both to scientific literature and to software development practice in the following ways:…. In a future work, we intend to study code reviews in greater detail, especially investigating to what extent they anticipate problems that would otherwise be detected during automated testing. Such study would cast light on the relationship between code review and automated testing, two important methods for early problem detection.
Conclusion
Key result
Implications
Importance & Future
directions
Modified from: Souza et al. Journal of Software Engineering Research and Development. 2015; 3: 9.
Manuscript structure Link your ideas
General background
Aims
Methodology
Results and figures
Summary of results
Implications for the field
Relevance of results
Problem in the field
Current state of the field Introduction
Methods
Results
Discussion
Solution
Situation/Problem
Evaluation/Comment
Manuscript structure Title and abstract
First impression of paper: clear/concise/convincing
Importance of your results
Validity of your conclusions
Relevance of your aims
It sells your work: Readers judge your style & credibility
Often first/only part that is read by
readers & reviewers
Your title & abstract summarize your study
Manuscript structure Title and abstract
Title
Important points
Only the main idea Accurate, simple Model/system Include keywords Fewer than 20 words Method/study type
Avoid
Unneeded words (A/The; A study of) Complex or sensational words Complex word order Abbreviations, jargon “New” or “novel”
Manuscript structure Title and abstract
Interrogative Quantifying electron transfer reactions in biological systems: what interactions
play the major role?
Indicative/ Descriptive
Test verification and design of the bicycle frame parameters
… + Method (subtitle)
The investigation of supply chain's reliability measure: a case study
Assertive/ Declarative
Coral mucus fuels the sponge loop in warm- and cold-water coral reef
ecosystems / Insect stereopsis demonstrated using a 3D insect cinema
Title
Manuscript structure Title and abstract
Context Background, problem, aim
Results Outcomes, effects
(+ statistics and key data)
Conclusion Relevance, implications Learning points, future
Methods Materials, equipment
Treatments, measurements
No references, unusual abbreviations, figures/tables Check guidelines/samples: I or We or This study/The author, active/passive, tenses
Abstract
Manuscript structure Unstructured abstract
Three-dimensional hierarchical ternary nanostructures for high-performance Li-ion battery anodes
Silicon is considered one of the most promising anode materials for high-performance Li-ion batteries due to its 4200 mAh/g theoretical specific capacity, relative abundance, low cost, and environmental benignity. However, silicon experiences a dramatic volume change (∼300%) during full charge/discharge cycling, leading to severe capacity decay and poor cycling stability. Here, we report a three-dimensional (3D) ternary silicon nanoparticles/conducting polymer/carbon nanotubes hybrid anode material for Li-ion batteries. The hierarchical conductive hydrogel framework with carbon nanotubes as the electronic fortifier offers a continuous electron transport network and high porosity to accommodate the volume expansion of Si particles. By 3D wrapping of silicon nanoparticles/single-wall carbon nanotubes with conducting polymer nanostructures, a greatly improved cycling performance is achieved with reversible discharge capacity over 1600 mAh/g and 86% capacity retention over 1000 cycles at the current rate of 3.3 A/g. Our findings represent a new direction for using advanced nanostructured materials to fabricate robust, high-performance lithium-ion batteries with improved capacity decay and cycling stability.
Reprinted with permission from: Liu B, et al. Nano Lett. 2013, 13, 3414‒3419.
Manuscript structure Unstructured abstract
Silicon is considered one of the most promising anode materials for high-performance Li-ion batteries due to its 4200 mAh/g theoretical specific capacity, relative abundance, low cost, and environmental benignity. However, silicon experiences a dramatic volume change (∼300%) during full charge/discharge cycling, leading to severe capacity decay and poor cycling stability.
Context
Here, we report a three-dimensional ternary silicon nanoparticles/conducting polymer/carbon nanotubes hybrid anode material for Li-ion batteries. Methods
The hierarchical conductive hydrogel framework with carbon nanotubes as the electronic fortifier offers a continuous electron transport network and high porosity to accommodate the volume expansion of Si particles. By 3D wrapping of silicon nanoparticles/single-wall carbon nanotubes with conducting polymer nanostructures, a greatly improved cycling performance is achieved with reversible discharge capacity over 1600 mAh/g and 86% capacity retention over 1000 cycles at the current rate of 3.3 A/g.
Results
Our findings represent a new direction for using advanced nanostructured materials to fabricate robust, high-performance lithium-ion batteries with improved capacity decay and cycling stability.
Conclusions
Reprinted with permission from: Liu B, et al. Nano Lett. 2013, 13, 3414‒3419.
Activity 2
Please see Activity 2 in your workbook
Promoting your research
Section 5
Customer Service Marketing your work
Dear Dr Struman,
Please find enclosed our manuscript entitled “Evaluation of ICT in Glasgow prognostic scoring in patients undergoing curative
resection for liver metastases,” which we would like to submit for publication as an Original Article in the International Medical
ICT Journal.
The Glasgow prognostic score (GPS) is of value for a variety of tumours. Several studies have investigated the prognostic value of the GPS in patients with metastatic breast cancer, but few studies have performed such an investigation for patients undergoing liver resection for liver metastases. Furthermore, there are currently no studies that have examined the prognostic value of the modified GPS (mGPS) using an ICT platform in these patients. The present study evaluated the mGPS using ICT in terms of its prognostic value for postoperative death in patients undergoing liver resection for breast cancer liver metastases.
A total of 318 patients with breast cancer liver metastases who underwent hepatectomy over a 15-year period were included in this study. The mGPS was calculated using ICT based on the levels of C-reactive protein and albumin, and the disease-free survival and cancer-specific survival rates were evaluated in relation to the mGPS. Prognostic significance was retrospectively analyzed by univariate and multivariate analyses. Overall, the results showed a significant association between cancer-specific survival and the mGPS and carcinoembryonic antigen level, and a higher mGPS was associated with increased aggressiveness of liver recurrence and poorer survival in these patients. This study is the first to demonstrate that the preoperative mGPS via a simple ICT tool is a useful prognostic factor for postoperative survival in cancer patients undergoing curative resection. This information is immediately clinically applicable for surgeons as well as hospital information and patient record systems and health care protocol developers. As a premier journal covering ICT in health care, we believe that the International Medical ICT Journal is the perfect platform from which to share our results with all those concerned with ICT use in cancer management.
Give the background to the research
What was done and what was found
Interest to journal’s readers
Cover letter to the editor
Editor’s name Manuscript title
Article type
Declarations on publication ethics Suggested reviewers Contact information
Customer Service Marketing your work Cover letter to the editor
This study is the first to demonstrate that the preoperative mGPS via a simple ICT tool is a useful prognostic factor for postoperative survival in cancer patients undergoing curative resection. This information is immediately clinically applicable for surgeons as well as hospital information and patient record systems and health care protocol developers. As a premier journal covering ICT in health care, we believe that the International Medical ICT Journal is the perfect platform from which to share our results with all those concerned with ICT use in cancer management.
Why will your study be interesting to the journal’s readership? (para 4)
Target your journal – keywords from the Aims and Scope
Conclusion & importance
Relevance
Customer Service Marketing your work Cover letter to the editor
Other important information:
Recommended reviewers Author’s contact information
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Reviewer Comment: In your analysis of the data you have chosen to use a somewhat obscure fitting function (regression). In my opinion, a simple Gaussian function would have sufficed. Moreover, the results would be more instructive and easier to compare to previous results.
Response: We agree with the Reviewer’s assessment of the analysis. Our tailored function, in its current form, makes it difficult to tell that this measurement constitutes a significant improvement over previously reported values. We describe our new analysis using a Gaussian fitting function in our revised Results section (Page 6, Lines 12–18).
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Reviewer Comment: In your analysis of the data you have chosen to use a somewhat obscure fitting function (regression). In my opinion, a simple Gaussian function would have sufficed. Moreover, the results would be more instructive and easier to compare with previous results.
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Reviewer Comment: In your analysis of the data you have chosen to use a somewhat obscure fitting function (regression). In my opinion, a simple Gaussian function would have sufficed. Moreover, the results would be more instructive and easier to compare with previous results.
Response: Although a simple Gaussian fit would facilitate comparison with the results of other studies, our tailored function allows for the analysis of the data in terms of the “Pack model” [Pack et al., 2015]. Hence, we have explained the use of this function and the Pack model in our revised Discussion section (Page 12, Lines 2–6).
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