短文改错及提高办法

一、试题简介1 ．短文长度为 110 词左右，文章难度相当于

初中的课文。2 ．在十行后设题，有的行不设题。3 ．错误类型分布：没错的一般一个，多词少

词两三个，错词六个。4 ．有的为逻辑推理错误，从语法上看不出问

题。5 ．有的错只有纵观全文才能断定。

6 ．短文改错 10 大重点错误。(1) and 与 but

I am sorry, and I have something important to tell you.

(2) 名词单复数形式The storm left, having caused a lot of damages.

(3) 人称代词误用I have lost my keys; I can’t remember where I left it.

(4) 逻辑推理错误Keep on, or you’ll succeed one day.

(5) 第三人称单数She has a little toy dog and she like it very much.

(6) 动词过去式He hang his coat by the window.

(7) so … that 结构Very loud did he speak that even the neighbors could hear him.

(8) 定语从句中 which 与 whereThis is the factory where we visited the other day.

(9) because, though 的使用错误Though it was raining hard, but they were still working.He was punished because what he had done.

(10) 形容词副词误用Please pay attention and watch close what I am going to do.

二、解题具体步骤1 ．粗看全文，不要一上来就改动。2 ．一行看三行，就某一行做判断时，要顾及

上下两行或整句。3 ．一行想全文，单句中合理还不够，要全文

合理。4 ．一行只能动一个词。5 ．别忘了在错词下画线。

6 ．多词处要在原文中划掉此词，在抄完此词后也用斜线划掉。

7 ．注意逻辑推理错误。因为有的题从语法上看不出问题，只有纵观全文才能断定。

8 ．弄清句子结构有利于判断。9 ．如感觉一行有两处错，应将最有把握处改

正。10 ．复核，做完题重看全文。

三、重点练习1. My parents are all teachers.

2. Hurry up! We have a little time left.

3. I am a stranger here. I have a few friends here.

4. Every hand of his is clean.

5. I lost my watch. I want to buy it.

6. I have not money now.

7. None of my ears was injured.

8. The book is worthy 100 dollars.

9. I went to the hospital to see the ill teacher.

10. I very like football.

11. Tom is my older brother.12. He is badly ill; when he is good again, I’ll take him

abroad.13. China has a big population.14. The boy is so wise that he can answer the question

quickly.15. The soldiers stood quietly, not daring to move a little.16. The workers are most from Paris.17. It is a pleased journey.18. He is not a teacher too.19. I have got the letter yet.20. Three days late, my sister came back.

21. Tom is the youngest of the two boys.22. She fell sleepy in class.23. The football game was quite excited.24. She was deep moved at the news.25. They were very satisfactory when they got the answer.26. You are possible to do it.27. I am poor. I have not more than ten dollars.28. It is sure that they will succeed in their work.29. We were excited at the glad news.30. The harder you work, the well you will study.31. We got on the school bus and which took us straight to

the People’s Park.

32. Every one agreed to his suggestion which we should hold a meeting to talk about the problem.

33. Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan.34. Why don’t you ask anybody else to help you?35. The pen is missing, for we cannot find it everywhere.36. Sorry, I have no such a book.37. The two languages are not at all the same in neither

spelling or grammar.38. Do you know our team leader we call him Big Wang?39. You’d better have all the machines run all night long.40. I have the same idea as his.

四、案例分析(NMET 08 全国卷 I)Dear Alice, I have just got some good news to tell to you. 76. __________

I win a national prize for painting last week. 77. __________

My father was so pleasing that he suggested 78. __________

I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying 79. __________

there for half a month, visiting place of interest 80. __________

or practicing my English as well. We’ve been 81. __________

writing to each for nearly a year now. I have 82. __________

often dreamed of talk face to face with you. 83. __________

I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that 84. __________

time. Perhaps we could go out to do some 85. __________

sightseeing together.Best,

Lily

Dear Alice, I have just got some good news to tell to you. 76. to I win a national prize for painting last week. 77. won My father was so pleasing that he suggested 78. pleased I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying 79. stay there for half a month, visiting place of interest 80. places or practicing my English as well. We’ve been 81. and writing to each Λ for nearly a year now. I have 82. other often dreamed of talk face to face with you. 83. talking I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that 84. on time. Perhaps we could go out to do some 85. √ sightseeing together.

Best,Lily

(NMET 08 全国卷 II) If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 76. __________29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my 77. __________English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. 78. __________Second, I will learn more about history of the 79. __________Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, 80. __________since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find 81. __________their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell 82. __________visitors about our history and culture and show 83. __________them their great achievements. In short, I will do 84. __________my best to help making the Games a success. 85. __________

(NMET 08 安徽卷 )One day, while my friend and I was traveling through 76. __________Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little 77. __________money. We decided stop at a village market to buy 78. __________something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and 79. __________ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great. 80. __________“Let’s got some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they 81. __________really taste well.” My friend could read some German, but 82. __________I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. 83. __________She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?” 84. __________I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said. 85. __________

五、备考措施1 ．平时学习时注意语言知识的准确性。2 ．常用词语的使用应合乎规范。3 ．训练自己的观察能力，发现细微差错。4 ．改错与写作密不可分，写作时练习不断纠

错。学生写作常见错误举例

1) He can be at home now because the light in his room is still on.

2) He need come here before the meeting begins.3) He used to get up very early in the morning, and now h

e is still doing so.

4) I needn’t come yesterday because all the work had been finished.

5) You hadn’t better stay up too late because you have to get up early tomorrow.

6) I will tell her about that when she will come tomorrow.7) The meeting is about to begin in ten minutes.8) The boy opened his eyes for a moment, looking at the

captain and then died.9) I have bought this bike for ten years and I am still using

it now.10) I haven’t learnt any English before I came here.11) The two thieves have been disappeared.12) The building built now will be our teaching building.

13) He is being operated by the famous doctor.14) I wonder if the doctor has been sent.15) The book written by him is sold well.16) This history book is worthy reading.17) We are going to talk about the problem discussing at

the last meeting.18) The girl dressed herself in red is my sister.19) Being seriously ill, his classmates sent him to hospital.20) Having not seen her for many years, we could hardly

recognize her.21) Seeing from space, the earth looks like a ball.22) English is easy to learn it.

23) I will get somebody repair the recorder for you.24) She decided to work harder in order to not fall behind

the others.25) It’s better to laugh than crying.26) It’s no use to send for the doctor.27) She practices to play the piano after school every day.28) When the teacher came in, he stopped listening to the

teacher.29) We are talking about if this plan should be carried out.30) I can not decide if to stay or not.31) My suggestion is we try for a second time.32) What will the professor say is not known yet.

33) I will go unless he invites me.

34) Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.

35) I won’t stay until he comes back.

36) An orphan is a child who’s parents are dead.

37) This is the very thing which I lost yesterday.

38) This is the car for that I paid a high price.

39) She is one of the students who has passed the exam.

40) This is the place where we visited last year.

41) I , who is your friend, can understand you.

42) China is a developing country, that is known to all.

43) The poet and writer are invited to give a speech at the meeting.

44) No one except my parents know it.45) Your clothes is on the table over there.46) The number of the students in that school are about one

thousand.47) The class was watching TV when I entered the room.48) The population of our country are increasing slowly no

w.

5 ．不花过多时间练改错。6 ．总复习开始不练改错，应多接触正面东西，

最好在后期练习。

Keys:(NMET 08 全国卷 I)76. 去掉 to 77. win→won78. pleasing→pleased 79. staying→stay80. place→places 81. or→and82. each→each other 83. talk→talking84. at→on 85. √

(NMET 08 全国卷 II)76. chose→chosen 77. 去掉 at78. about→with/to 79. history→the history80. good→well 81. was→am82. ways→way 83. √84. their→our 85. making→make

(NMET 08 安徽卷 )

76. was→were 77. 去掉 not

78. stop→to stop 79. choose→chose

80. it→them 81. got→get

82. well→good 83. and→so

84. How→Why 85. √