mistakes initial assessment

INITIAL ASSESSMENTMAIN WRITING MISTAKES NI1 MAZARRÓN

It’s near to the beachI would like finding a new job

The English it’s important for that

It’s near the beachI would like to find a new job

English is important for that

So english is easier.I work like teacher in a school

…is necesary

So English is easier.I work as a teacher in a school

…it is necessary

…without have problems with English.

I think is important to….It is a important language

…without having problems with English.

I think it is important to….It is an important language

I began to learn it many time ago

I meet with foreign peopleAs consecuence,….

I began to learn it a long time ago

I meet foreign peopleAs a consequence,….

I teach to my pupils…I am a teacher who teach primary students

I prefer do it without thinking

I teach my pupils…I am a teacher who teaches primary students

I prefer doing/to do it without thinking

I decided study English…

I hope learn so muchThe reasons that I would like to learn English are…

I decided to study English…

I hope to learn so muchThe reasons why I would like to learn English are…

I need improve my English because…

I born in MalagaI need it for be a teacher

I need to improve my English because…

I was born in MalagaI need it to be a teacher

I like swim, listen music, visit my family

It is actually necessary to working

Speak in English is very important

I like swimming, listening to music, visiting my family

It is nowadays necessary to work

Speaking in English is very important