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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print

AFL

Evaluating PeerWork

AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded

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Name Bridie Lacy


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Activity 1

Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces ofwork. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible youshould use a best fit model this means that you take an overall view rather thanharshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples

and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the!"#$%! &'(')$"!

NON STOP POP

Minimal Level

110 23 marks

Basic Level 22435 marks

Procienc!Level 33"4# marks

E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks

framin a s!ot"

incl#din and

e$cl#din

elements as

appropriate

%ye contact

&ein made

wit! t!e

readers

#sin a variety of

s!ot distances as

appropriate

'!ere is a

rane in variety

t minimal

li!tin s!owns!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( set

'!ere is no

variation in

s!ots only &asic

s(ills are s!own

to !ave &een

#sedselectin mise)en)

sc*ne incl#dincolo#r" +#re"

li!tin" o&,ects

and settin

'!e individ#al

is too close #pto !ave a mise

en scene

manip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!e

conte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-in

'!e si-in of

pict#res varies

t!ro#!o#t and

t!ey are

appropriate to

t!e content

acc#rately #sin

lan#ae andreister

'!e lan#ae

appliesappropriately

appropriately

interatin

ill#stration and

te$t

'e$t stands o#t

on t!e pae and

is reada&le for

t!e readerss!owin

#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and pae

desin

Paes are well

laid o#t and

spacin !as

&een ta(en into

considerations!owin

awareness of t!eneed for variety in

'!ere !as &een

a variation insi-ed fonts t!at


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fonts and te$t si-e are s!own#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set

Lac(in in

p!oto s!op

s(ills to &e

s!own

S#mmary /omment


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FLAW&

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framin a s!ot"

incl#din and

e$cl#din

elements as

appropriate

'!e pict#re is

appropriate to

t!e content t

it is o0 centre

and t!e

positionin of it

is wron#sin a variety of

s!ot distances as

appropriate

ariety of s!ots

#sed

t!ro#!o#t t!e

maa-ines!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( set

'!e pict#res

apply well to

t!e maa-ine

and o alon

appropriatelyselectin mise)en)

sc*ne incl#din

colo#r" +#re"

li!tin" o&,ects

and settin

A very dar(

and d#ll mise

en scene !ard

to see t!e

#ality wit!in

t!e pict#resmanip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!e

conte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-in

'!e p!otos are

s!own to &e

#ite small t

overall !ave a

ood aspect

a&o#t t!em

acc#rately #sin

lan#ae and

reister

'!e lan#ae

#sed wit!in t!e

content is

correct for t!e

taret a#dienceappropriately

interatinill#stration and

te$t

'e$t stands o#t

on t!e paescatc!in t!e

readers eyes!owin

#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and pae

desin

Pae desin

and layo#t is

applied

appropriately

and wor(s well

wit! t!e paes!owin

awareness of t!e

need for variety in

fonts and te$t si-e

Di0erent si-ed

font #sed

t!ro#!o#t

s!owin avariation


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#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set

Minimal p!oto

s!op s(ills

s!own wit!in

t!is maa-ine

S#mmary /omment


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STACK

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framin a s!ot"incl#din and

e$cl#din

elements as

appropriate

No eye contactis &ein made

t t!is does

!ave a ood

pict#re layo#t

r#nnin

t!ro#!o#t it#sin a variety of

s!ot distances as

appropriate

All t!e pict#res

loo( very

similar t!ey

are lac(in in

di0erences and

t!ere is novariety

t!ro#!o#t t!e

maa-ines!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( set

All of t!e s!ots

s!own are

made

appropriate to

t!e content

wit!in itselectin mise)en)

sc*ne incl#din

colo#r" +#re"

li!tin" o&,ects

and settin

All t!e s!ots

re3ect t!e

maa-ine wit!

t!e ri!t mise

en scene to &e

s!ownmanip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!e

conte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-in

'!e si-in of

t!e font varies

t!ro#!o#t t!e

maa-ine and

is an

appropriate

si-e for t!e

a#dience to &ea&le to readacc#rately #sin

lan#ae and

reister

All t!e lan#ae

applies

appropriatelyappropriately

interatin

ill#stration and

te$t

'!e di0erent

te$ts ra& t!e

a#diences eye

s!owin

#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and paedesin

'!e font #sed is

#ite &orin

and old it is

lac(insomet!in news!owin Di0erent si-es


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awareness of t!e

need for variety in

fonts and te$t si-e

are s!own to

!ave &een #sed

#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set

P!oto s!op

s(ills are at a

&are minim#m

t in certain

pict#res are

seen to !ave

&een #sed

S#mmary /omment


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DUBZONE

Minimal Level

110 23 marks





e$cl#din

elements as

appropriate

ery simplisticLac( of

creativity

#sin a variety of

s!ot distances as

appropriate

S!ot o#t of

foc#s and not

on a #ality

levels!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( set

.t all is #ite

m#ddled not

relatin to t!e

contentselectin mise)en)

sc*ne incl#din

colo#r" +#re"

li!tin" o&,ects

and settin

Pict#res close

#p so mise en

scene cannot

&e seen

manip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!e

conte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-in

/roppin and

resi-in can &e

seen to of &een

#sed

t!ro#!o#t

acc#rately #sin

lan#ae and

reister

Lan#ae

applies

appropriatelyappropriately

interatin

ill#stration and

te$t

All ,#m&led

wit!in t!e

do#&le pae

spreads!owin

#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and pae

desin

4nderstandin

can &e seen

s!owin

awareness of t!e

need for variety in

fonts and te$t si-e

Di0erent font

si-es lac( of

#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set

.ct can &e seen

to of &een #sed

to a minimal

level

S#mmary /omment


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Task 2

"ow using the skills youve ac*uired in task + evaluate yo! o"# "o!k a#$ t%e#

t"o pieces of "o!k f!om classmates. Use the space provided to give specificexamplesand write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.

&a'a(i#e title) A NAT*+E C,A-.OTTE C.*//O-D

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framin a s!ot"

incl#din and

e$cl#din

elements as

appropriate

Pict#res are

s!own to &e of

a !i! #ality

and detail

#sin a variety of

s!ot distances asappropriate

Di0erent s!ots

!ave &een #sed

s!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( set

All appropriate

to t!e indie feel

selectin mise)en)

sc*ne incl#din

colo#r" +#re"

li!tin" o&,ects

and settin

Mise en scene

applies to +t in

wit! t!e

conte$t

manip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!econte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-in

All can &e seen

to of &een #sed

to a deree

acc#rately #sin

lan#ae and

reister

Lan#ae

reister applies

t!ro#!o#tappropriately

interatin

ill#stration and

te$t

All appropriate

to taret

a#dience

s!owin#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and pae

desin

4nderstandincan &e seen t

wit! room for

improvement

s!owin

awareness of t!e

need for variety in

fonts and te$t si-e

Font si-es vary

#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set

.ct can &e seen

to of &een #sed

S#mmary /omment


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&a'a(i#e title) P,OEN*0 S,ANNON ,AA-D

Minimal Level

110 23 marks





e$cl#din

elements as

appropriate

5ood #alitys!ots !ave

&een #sed and

framed well

#sin a variety of

s!ot distances as

appropriate

Di0erent s!ots

!ave &een #sed

t!ro#!#ts!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( set

Material applies

appropriately

selectin mise)en)

sc*ne incl#dincolo#r" +#re"

li!tin" o&,ects

and settin

Mise en scene

oes wit! t!et!eme of

maa-ine

manip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!e

conte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-in

/roppin and

resi-in can &e

seen to of &een

#sed

acc#rately #sin

lan#ae andreister

Lan#ae

reister appliesall t!ro#!o#t

appropriately

interatin

ill#stration and

te$t

All appropriate

to conte$t of

t!e maa-ine

s!owin

#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and pae

desin

4nderstandin

can &e seen

ood layo#t

s!owin

awareness of t!eneed for variety in

fonts and te$t si-e

5ood #se of

di0erent si-in

#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set

/an &e seen

t!ro#!o#t

S#mmary /omment


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&a'a(i#e title)

Minimal Level

110 23 marks




framin a s!ot"

incl#din ande$cl#din

elements as

appropriate#sin a variety of

s!ot distances as

appropriates!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( setselectin mise)en)

sc*ne incl#din

colo#r" +#re"li!tin" o&,ects

and settinmanip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!e

conte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-inacc#rately #sin

lan#ae and

reisterappropriately

interatin

ill#stration and

te$ts!owin

#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and pae

desins!owin

awareness of t!e

need for variety in

fonts and te$t si-e#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set

'ask 3 'arget setting

4se t!e feed&ac( from yo#r classmates to set tarets to improve yo#r wor(64se t!e rid &elow to foc#s yo#r areas for improvement6 'ry to &e as speci+c

as possi&le and w!ere possi&le create one taret for eac! area of t!e mar(sc!eme6 Remem&er to &e realistic" t!at means ma(in s#re yo#r tarets areac!ieva&le and realistic for yo#r a&ility6


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&a'a(i#e title)

Minimal Level

1

10 23 marks


Procienc!Level 3

3"4# marks

E$cellenceLevel 4

4%"0 marksframin a s!ot"

incl#din and

e$cl#din

elements as

appropriate#sin a variety of

s!ot distances as

appropriates!ootin material

appropriate to t!e

tas( set

selectin mise)en)sc*ne incl#din

colo#r" +#re"

li!tin" o&,ects

and settinmanip#latin

p!otorap!s as

appropriate to t!e

conte$t for

presentation"

incl#din croppin

and resi-in

acc#rately #sinlan#ae and

reisterappropriately

interatin

ill#stration and

te$ts!owin

#nderstandin of

conventions of

layo#t and pae

desin

s!owinawareness of t!e

need for variety in

fonts and te$t si-e#sin ./'

appropriately for

t!e tas( set


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