最大限度地展示您的研究成果－英语论文写作与编辑第二讲张科宏博士...

最大限度地展示您的研究成果－英语论文写作与编辑第二讲张科宏博士长青藤编辑中国区编辑主任同济大学兼职教授哈佛大学医学院助理教授（ 2003－ 2007）

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语言问题拼写错误格式错误冠词使用错误文法错误用词不当


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科学逻辑错误描述模糊难以理解的超长复合句


Wang et al., Neuroscience Letters 382:236-241, 2005

Acupuncture, a pearl in the Traditional Chinese Medicine, has been shown to bring about functional recovery after spinal cord injury, it has been widely used by doctors and favorably received by patients. …….



南宋末年，金兵大举入侵中原，朝廷昏聩无力，百姓生灵涂炭。。。。。话说嵩山脚下一对杨姓夫妇，年过半百，膝下尚无子嗣。



海上起了风暴，老约翰还是开着破船驶离了港湾。

南宋末年，金兵大举入侵中原，朝廷昏聩无力，百姓生灵涂炭。。。。。话说嵩山脚下一对杨姓夫妇，年过半百，膝下尚无子嗣。




Acupuncture expedites the functional recovery after spinal cord injury.



Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of

NMDA receptors



Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors

Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a serious public health concern in developed countries. In the US, TBI is the leading cause of death in young adults, with a mortality rate of >20% within 30 days of the trauma. Danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza) is a Chinese Traditional Medicine, and has long been used to treat many diseases in China. ……




Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a major cause of death and disability worldwide. In majority of the cases, patients die days or even weeks after the trauma due to secondary damage instead of the primary damage sustained at the moment of impact. Increasing evidence indicates a critical role of NMDA receptor in the secondary damage after TBI. …….




Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a major cause of death and disability worldwide. In majority of the cases, patients die days or even weeks after the trauma due to secondary damage instead of the primary damage sustained at the moment of impact. Increasing evidence indicates a critical role of NMDA receptor in the secondary damage after TBI.

……. Danshensu is a major active component of danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza), a medicinal herb native to China and Japan. ……..



Dopamine D4 receptor antagonists alleviate cognitive deficits in schizophrenic patients



Dopamine D4 receptor antagonists alleviate cognitive deficits in schizophrenic patientsClinical studies suggested that dopamine D2 receptors are involved in schizophrenia. However, no pathological evidence is avaliable for a role of D2 receptors in its etiology.



Dopamine D4 receptor antagonists alleviate cognitive deficits in schizophrenic patientsDopamine D2 antagonists could alleviate negative symptoms in schizophrenic patients. However, postmortem analysis and imaging studies failed to reveal abnormal D2 recptor density or signaling in patients with schizophrenia.




如何识别编辑公司


中国作者撰写论文核心障碍 1 ）语言障碍



中国作者撰写论文核心障碍 1 ）语言障碍拼写／用词／文法可读性



中国作者撰写论文核心障碍 1 ）语言障碍 2 ）思维模式障碍



Ross Baldessarini, MD. DScEditor-in-Chief, Ivy EditingProfessor, Harvard Medical SchoolIn addition to language problems, many papers by Chinese physicians are poorly organized. Very often, I understand all sentences but have no idea what the authors are trying to say with the paragraphs and the entire manuscript.



编辑“ 编”：组织 “ 辑”：裁减“ 编辑”：帮助作者讲述 “故事”



优秀的编辑公司 1 ）编辑团队真正懂行的专家有编辑中国作者论文经验



优秀的编辑公司 1 ）编辑团队真正懂行的专家有编辑中国作者论文经验 2 ）编辑模式多轮次互动改稿



优秀的编辑公司 1 ）编辑团队真正懂行的专家有编辑中国作者论文经验 2 ）编辑模式多轮次互动改稿 3 ）畅通的沟通渠道国内编辑：精通中／英文的科学家



鉴别 “ 伪劣产品” 1 ）闪烁其词的编辑团队“ 美国哈佛大学医学院王博士”



鉴别 “ 伪劣产品” 1 ）闪烁其词的编辑团队“ 美国哈佛大学医学院王博士” 2 ）不可置信的低廉费用“ 每千字人民币 168 元”



鉴别 “ 伪劣产品” 1 ）闪烁其词的编辑团队“ 美国哈佛大学医学院王博士” 2 ）不可置信的低廉费用“ 每千字人民币 168 元” 3 ）明显的撒谎“ 我们的合作伙伴包括美国哈佛大学和 Nature 杂志社”



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