• A ．命题作文（ Short composition ）• 能根据所给作文题、提纲或图表、数据等

写一篇 200 个单词左右的作文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，结构严谨，语法正确，语言得体、通顺。（ 35 分钟）

• B ．便条（ Note-writing ）• 能根据所给提示写 50-60 单词的便条、通

知、请帖等，能做到格式正确，语言得体。（ 10 分钟）

• 二、评分原则• 1. 专业四级作文题采用整体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印

象给分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。• 2. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。既要考虑

作文是否切题，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想。

• 3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。

• 4. 专业四级考试要求阅卷人员评分时综合考虑以下四个问题：

• A. 作文是否体现主题思想• B 组织结构是否合理• C. 语法文字是否有重大错误• D. 卷面布局是否整洁（字体端正清晰、易于辨识；规范大

小写；词间空格、段前缩进；正确使用标点符号；避免拼写错误、减少涂改。）

• 三、评分标准• 15 － 13 分：内容切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯

性好，基本无语言错误。• 12 － 10 分：内容切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有

少量语言错误。• 9 － 7 分：内容基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字上连

贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。• 6 － 4 分：内容基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯

性差，有较严重错误的语言错误。• 3 － 0 分：条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分

句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

• 注；• 1. 字数要求：• 2. 段落要求：• 3. 如照抄提示中原句，均不得计入字数。• 4. 按规定，考生作文若为零分，无论其总

分是否高于 60 分，均作不及格处理；若其作文高于 0 分，低于 6 分，报道成绩时需从总分中减去实得分与 6 分之差。

• 样卷一（ 14 分）• Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?• With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern peopl

e’s life, making friends online enjoys its great popularity, especially among young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online.

• Firstly, too much attention to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and families in the real world. If we look around, we often find a lot of young people staying online and chatting with online friends all day long. By the same time, less. Therefore, they feel lonelier in real life and spend more time on the Internet.

• Besides, online friends are often disguised. A large number of cases have proved that many criminals make use of Internet to cheat of money or love. Even if they are not cheaters, they tend to be totally different persons when you get in actual contact with them. There’s always a gap between the real world and the imaginary one.

• Nevertheless, it is unwise to make friends online. Those who are indulging in Internet should cast your eyesight to the friendship and kinship in the real life. What you should do is to seek solution, but not to escape.

• Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?• Nowadays, it has been a fashion to make friends onlin

e, and more and more teenagers, college students and even many adults will spend a lot of time chatting with people on the Internet. But I don’t think it is wise to make friends online.

• Firstly, most of people will not reveal their real identity on the Internet, which will not enable you to make true friends. Just imagine, a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and I’m sure we will feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth.

• Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers. The unhealthy stuff will both physically and psychologically influence young people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole life. At last, making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and your family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. You will find you have lost the ability of how to communicate with others properly.

• In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Internet.

• 样卷三（ 9分）• Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?• There is a tendency we can’t deny that most of us hav

e access to Internet. Consequently, making friends online has become a common thing. Some may argue that making friends online isn't a good choice, however, personally, I hold the idea that it is wiser to make friends online.

• On one hand, it’s a kind of company. What we live in our apartment, we seldom communicate to the neighbors, esp. that our family members are outside, the sense of feel lonely overcome us. Therefore, in order to get rid of this, we need to find someone to talk with. Then making friends online is a good way to solve this problem. Meanwhile, we can not only gain friendship, but also exchange our minds. In this way, we obtain a sense of satisfaction from talking with a stranger who will tend to say beautiful words toward us.

• On the other hand, making friends online help us enrich our sight. We make friends, coming from different areas, accordingly, we obtain a lot of information that we can’t get from our limited knowledge. Sometimes, friends online encourage us to read helpful books where will be able to learn more.

• All in all, from my point of view, making friends is helpful for enriching our knowledge and helping us encourage with others, hence, it is advisable to make friends online as long as we use it properly.

• 样卷四（ 7 分）• Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?• People would like to make the best of Internet to broad

en their minds, they can get large information, they can play interesting games, even they can mak friends online. While a question has been arisen: “Is It wise to make friends on line?”

• The Internet is not reality, you can not trust a person through the Internet. Now I would not like to talk about the advantages of the Internet, while the disadvantages you can not deny is existing.

• Many people make the most of it to do bade thinks, such as trick you that he is need of money eagerly and wise you would help him as a friend, or character as your friends to inform your family that you are in danger and need money to save you, etc. All the things can be seen on the newspapers magazines, etc. So it is unwise to trust a so called online friend.

• I can Jump to the conclude that it is unwise to make friends online, because it is not reality, also we can not trust others without knowing the person well. So let’s do utmost to make the base use of the advantages of the Internet. cherish the friends around us!

• 样卷五（ 5 分）• Is it wise to make friends online?• I think it is wise to make friends online. First, Now job’s

pressure more and more. Everyone cann’t better talk face to face. Second, Friends online may speak everything of them.

• Third, Friends online may help something of them and solvable some problem.

• The forth, Friends online may gain more knowledge and information.

• All in all, make friends online is wise in the society. Make friends online cann’t change a 潮流。 Everyone may enjoy Everyone with his friends online!

• The Benefits of Volunteering• Volunteering is getting more and more popular

in modern times.I think this activity is of benefit very much.As we all know,December 5th is International Volunteers Day.It is useful for people all over the world.

• Volunteering is founded by the UN.Since there were two world wars,the world became more and more dangerous.More and more people lost their homes and suffering a lot of difficulties.They became the most important problems to be solved.

• There’s no one but longs to live a happy life.It pays to help them to have their ideal lives.With the world developing quickly,our earth is becoming a villadge.It is very happy if we live together with love.

• Many people spend a lot of time to do volunteer work.They are very pleased and happy to others.

• On account we must help others in need to let them live happy.It is very meaningful.I hope we can do more to help others who are in need.Because we are all live in the same world.We must help others.

• The Benefits of Volunteering• Volunteering is not only a way to help other people but

also a positive attitude towards life,which will make the persons you’re helped to live a better life as well as yourself.One can benefit a lot from it.

• I worked as a volunteer for the 2007 World Bridge Campion,the experience of which teaches me a lot.At that time,I got up at 6 o’clock and went back to school until midnight with tiring legs,but when I find what I did was a great help for the competitors and one day a player from South Africa told me,"Your beautiful smile make me think of my daughter.”

• I know the work I did was of great important to them,what we do for them made them feel at home and would remind them of a welcomed expression China.However,I think I benefit more from it.I Learn to communicate with foreign people and to be confident,patient and helpful,which I can not learn from class.Volunteering makes grow up and know more about life,After this experience,I hold the understand that “to give before ask,”we need to contribute ourselves to the society we ask for something.

• In a word,we can benefit from volunteering a lot.

• The Benefits of Volunteering• Volunteering,in many people’s opinion,is almo

st a waste of time.Volunteers seem to gain little,if not nothing from their work.But actually it is not the case at all.Volunteers always find their work meaningful and worthwhile.

• The most apparent benefit of volunteering is that volunteers can get chances to get close to the real society.As most volunteers are young and inexperienced college students,it will help them a lot to witness social reality and take part in social activities.

• Another major benefit volunteers can gain is the cultivation of a sense of responsibility.By helping the weak members of our society,volunteers always feel on their shoulder the duty of citizenship which is necessary in maintaining good relationship in a family,a community and a whole society.A third benefit that is often overlooked by people is the happiness at the bottom of the heart.This is gained by simply helping others.

• Being a volunteer may not bring you any money,but surely one can gain a lot from their volunteering work which benefits their later life and work.

• Practice Makes Perfect• “Practice makes perfect” is a famous saying. The truth o

f it is self-evident. The more you practice ,the more skillful you will be.Moreover,practice helps you find better ways of doing things. As everyone can see,practice help us to be efficient.

• When we study English, we have so much to learn such as grammar and vocabulary. In order to learn to it well, we need much practice. We must read a lot and write a lot. Only through practice can we have a good command of the language.

• Do remember to practice if you want to speak English fluently and express yourself freely.Another case in point is typing. A good typist can type fast and accurately. But you will not be surprised at her performance if you know how much time she has spent practicing. Through practice, she has both speed and accuracy improved.

• It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. Since we all of us have realized the importance of practice , why not put it into practice?

• Practice Makes Perfect• As we all known, “practice makes perfect” is an

old saying. It means that the more you practice , the more you know and get. The saying can be found in every respect.

• For example, we learning English. We have studied English for more than 8 years. At the beginning of the study. Our vocabulary is so limited increasing. We practice speaking English ,writing English, listening English, and so on. Now we practice in the TEM-4 to show our English standard.

• On the other hand, besides in learning English, practice is useful to others. When we are learning the new subject. At first, we all find it difficult to master it. But after hard working and practice, we gradually learn it well. Practice is main method of learning everything.

• According to this, we all know that the more you practice, the more you will know and get. If you want to succeed,you should have practice for a long time. Because hard work,practice and chances due to success. Let’s try our best to practice more and more.

• Practice Makes Perfect• Why practice makes perfect? Because practice

help you developing the knowledge and experience about what you do. The more practice you do the more skill you will improve. So you will be perfect.

• For example. In the English studying, practice will make you progress. More listening practice help you hear more fast rate, and help you hear more clearer. If you keep up reading about one hour in the morning every day,you will improve your speaking ability.

• And reading more novels will probably help you more faster, more understandable. And writing practice could make you be more familiar with the English.

• For another example, such as in basketball sports. More practice help you know more how to pass ball, and how to help others to play.

• At all, I think practice makes perfect.

• Never Give Up• “If at first you don’t succeed, try, try again.” Thes

e are wise words. One should never give up. There is always another opportunity and option.

• Once I ran for monitor of my class. Unfortunately I lost. I looked my mistakes and decided to correct them. The following year, I ran for monitor again. This time I gave speeches, called the voters on the phone, and handed out brochures. This time I won. Never give up. These is always another opportunity.

• Once I wanted to talk with my friend. Unfortunately, his computer was down and I couldn't e-mail him. His phone line was busy so I couldn't’t call him. Mail could take too long so I couldn't’t write to him .I got on the bus and went across town to visit him. There is always option.

• My advice is to always look for another opportunity, or another option. These is always something else. Don’t give up.

• Never Give Up• If you want to succeed, you must set goals in your life. S

ome people say that one should never stop working for his goals. Basically, I agree with this opinion. There are several reasons for my position.

• First of all, failure is the mother of success. Keeping trying will bring us to success one day. If we stop working for our goals whenever we meet with obstacles, we will get nowhere. Secondly, no pains, no gains. You should never expect a pie falling from the sky on you one day. Last but not least, persistence is a quality of a successful person.

• Of cause, the goals we set must be realistic. Otherwise, we will spend all our time and energy without getting anywhere. However, the experiences of many people have proved that to keep trying is the best way to success. Thus, we should never, never give up.

• 五、 1995 － 2011TEM-4 命题作文评析、审题指导• 1995 The Advantages and Disadvantages of Part Time

Jobs• 1996 The Main Differences Between My College Life an

d My Middle School Life• 1997 More Pressure from Academic Studies Does/Doe

s Not Good to Us• 1998 One Way to Solve the Problem• 1999 A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising o

n Television• 2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities

• 2001 Travel Broadens the Mind• 2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthy• 2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood• 2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?• 2005 My Idea of a University Art Festival• 2006 Saving Money or Using Tomorrow’s Money• 2007 Is It Wise to Make friends on Line? • 2008 The Benefits of Volunteering• 2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?• 2010 Should College Students Hire Cleaners?• 2011 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed for Pollution?

• 作 业• Write a composition of about 200 words

on the following topic:

• Living Off the Campus