英语写作复习议论文

Shopping on the Internet优点：缺点：

save time, cheaper …

quality? not safe/ pay ，…

网络购物究竟有何利弊呢 ?

Beginning:

Ending:

Main part( 正文 ):

An outline

直接点题，开门见山

总结，号召，个人观点

Beginning:

Ending:

Main part( 正文 ):

Advantages:1.

2.

Shopping on the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages

disadvantages:

Every coin has two sides .

save time cheaper …

quality ？pay / not safe

网络购物有优点也有缺点呢 ? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好坏。

We should … properly.

1.completeness( 完整 )

高分作文四要素：

优点：省时间，更便宜；不受营业时间的限制缺点：看不到实物；网络支付不安全。

网络购物究竟有何利弊呢 ? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好坏。

不受营业时间的限制go shopping at any time

看不到实物 can only see pictures

1. 迂回表达难点 , 不受汉语牵制 .

1. 迂回表达难点 , 不受汉语牵制 .

降低考试难度 make exams easier

充分利用纸张 use both sides of the paper

不遗余力 try one’s best

被大学录取 become a university student

翻天覆地的变化 great changes

举足轻重 play an important part

2. 简单句

3. 优化简单句（通过从句，好词好句）

She is so kind that we all like her.

She is kind.

We all like her.

Shopping on the Internet has advantages and

disadvantages .

Shopping on the Internet has many advantages.

We can save a lot of time. We can buy cheaper things.

We can also go shopping at any time.

It also has disadvantages. We can only see the

pictures of the things on the Internet. So we don’t

know about the quality. We need to pay on the Net.

It is not safe.

We should be careful when shopping on the Net.

We should use the Internet properly . It can serve us

better.

We can not only save lots of time but also buy cheaper things .

It’s not safe to pay on the Net.

We should use the Internet properly so that it can serve us better.



2. fluency( 连贯性）

Linking expressions ( 议论文中的衔接词举例：递进：转折 :

原因 :

结果 :

目的 :

对比 :

总结：个人想法：多个观点：

for example such as

besides what’s more even worse what’s worse

however , but

thanks to because of

as a result so so that

in order to do in order that

while on one hand + on the other hand

in all/short in a word last but not least

in my opinion/view

First,… Second,… Third, … Finally,…

because

Shopping on the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.

_________________,shopping on the Internet has many

advantages.__________, we can not only save lots of time

but also buy cheaper things . _____________,we can shop

at any time .

____________________,it also has disadvantages. We

can only see the pictures . So we don’t know about the

quality. ________________, it’s not safe to pay on the Net.

____________, we should use the Internet properly

so that it can serve us better.

For example, What’s more,

On one hand,

What’s worse,

On the other hand,

In my view



2. fluency( 连贯性）3. correctness( 正确）

Check:

Spelling Grammar Punctuation标点

1. 短文中共 11 个错误。2. 一旦发现错误，直接站起来并指出错误。3. 找到错误最多的组获胜。

Group competition !( 小组竞赛）

1.I want to make you understand2.Now many people plan to 3.buy cars instead of bike.Theythink 4.it’s fast to drive cars.But I think that 5.car .make the air dirty. It’s easy .to 6.by bike to school or work. Ride bikes7. can help people keep health, and, 8..some students even advise their9. parents cycle to work.

Dear Editor: Now many people plan to buy cars instead of bike. They think it’s faster to drive cars. But I think that cars make the air dirty. It’s easy to by bike to school or work. Ride bikes can help people keep health, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes always make me happy, so I prefer to ride to school. I am quiet happy to see that many students ride to school in China, some students even advise their parents cycle to work. Jane

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Spelling Grammar Punctuation

Dear Editor, Now many people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. They think it’s fast to drive cars. But I think that cars make the air dirty. It’s easy to ride to school or work. Riding bikes can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes always makes me happy, I prefer to ride to school. I am quite happy to see that many students ride to school in China. Some students even advise their parents to cycle to work. Jane


2. fluency( 连贯 )

3. correctness ( 正确 )

4. handwriting


中考英语作文命题趋向之一 ----- 突出时代性

What can we do to reduce the air pollution?

stop smoking

ride bikes or walkspread messages about protecting environment

What can we do to reduce the air pollution?

1.plant trees

2.stop smoking3.ride bikes or walk

4.spread messages …

中国的空气污染越来越严重，为了控制空气污染，请给出 4 个建议并提出号召或希望。建议： 1. 多种树 2. 戒烟 3. 以步代车 4. 宣传环保知识

Beginning ：（开门见山，直奔主题。）

Ending: （号召或希望）

Mainpart

Good beginnings:

In China, the air pollution has become a serious problem. It’s everyone’s duty to control it.

The air pollution has become more andmore serious. We should do everything we can to control it.

How can we reduce the air pollution in China? Here are some suggestions.

1.plant trees






Mainpart

How to give suggestions:

1. We should / had better / must…

2. We ought to / are supposed to …

3. It’s necessary/ important for us to …

4. Doing … is a good way to …

1.plant trees






Mainpart

Good endings:

1. In short , we should do our best to reduce the air pollution! Let’s say no to pollution!

2. In a word , if we follow the advice above,the air will be fresher and fresher!

3. In all , let’s fight with the the air pollution! We need fresh air!

Completeness

(少一个要点扣一分）

Beginning

( )

Main part

（共 4 要点）( )

Ending

( )

Fluency Linking words （）如完全没有衔接词扣一分

Handwriting

（书写潦草扣一分）

Good

( )

Bad

( )

Correctness

(2 个错误一分）

Spelling

___ 个 Grammar

__ 个punctuation

____ 个

满分 12 分

总得分 ____

扣分栏

- 0

- 0

- 0

Before writing: An outline ( 完整性）

While writing

After writing : Check （准确性）

1.Indirect2. Simple sentences3. Improve4. linking words （连贯性）

书写工整！

目前 , 考试作弊现象严重 , 请围绕以下要点写一篇文章 .

原因 : 1. 考试太难 2. 自身努力不够、 3. 大量时间花在网络上看法和建议 :1.作弊有害 2. 做人要诚实学习要努力 3. 学校减少或降低考试难度

Homework:

Goodbye!Thank you!

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